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Pandemic covid 19 and influencer

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The COVID-19 pandemic is unfolding in a complicated way all around the world and also in Vietnam. These are difficult times for the advertising business. As a result of COVID-19, people have been obliged to limit their outdoor activities and have turned to the internet for entertainment and communication. It is true that Vietnamese people have been more engaged on social media since the outbreak (DataReportal, 2021). Also, the issue is having a detrimental effect on the activities and revenue of several agencies and businesses who have used traditional marketing for their campaign. Events, festivals, and paid partnership relationships have all been postponed or eventually cancelled. However, this is not the case with influencers which means that social media networks may provide even more opportunities for businesses as with influencer marketing being particularly relevant and beneficial for small businesses in maintaining customer relationships during the crisis.
The COVID-19 pandemic is unfolding
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in a complicated way
all around the world and
also
in Vietnam. These are difficult times for the advertising
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business
.
As a result
of COVID-19,
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people
have
been obliged
to limit their outdoor activities and have turned to the internet for entertainment and communication. It is true that Vietnamese
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
have been more engaged on social media since the outbreak (
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DataReportal
, 2021).
Also
, the issue is having a detrimental effect on the activities and revenue of several agencies and
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businesses
who have
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used
traditional marketing for their campaign.
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Events
, festivals, and paid partnership relationships have all
been postponed
or
eventually
cancelled.
However
, this is not the case with influencers which means that social media networks may provide even more opportunities for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
businesses
as with influencer marketing being
particularly
relevant and beneficial for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
businesses
in maintaining customer relationships during the crisis.
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IELTS essay Pandemic covid 19 and influencer

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