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Describe your hometown or place you used to live

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I was born in QN city which is a province in central VietNam. In here, the weather has 2 distinct seasons. In the summer, it is very hot and in the winter, it is very cool. This place is often suffered with storms and floods that the winter comes on. I like the summer, I don’t like the winter. Because I am afraid of cold. Near my house, there is a beach that name is called ‘khe hai’. It takes me fifteen minutes from my house to the beach. Now I’m living and working in hcm city so I’m very happy to come back my hometown in the summer. I can go to beach. The most my favorite thing is do excerise with my bike from my house to the beach in the early morning. I usually wake up at 4h30 a. m. I can see sunset in the beach that is very beautiful. there are days, I go to beach two twice a day. So my skin get brown. But I am not scary. There is a truth. i don’t know to swim in spite of I live near the beach. The sunshine in my hometown is hotter than HCM city, but in here there are many trees and not many houses, buidings so I feel more comfortable. There are many fields that are very poetic. The air is very fresh and clean. In recent years, there are many companies that grow up. I feel that the air isnot fresh that my hometown used to be. in my hometown, there are famous places like Ly Sơn island, Mũi ba làng an, mỹ khê beach… there are so many delicious food as mỳ quảng, bánh xèo, bánh bèo …. These are simple foods but personnally, I love these. people are very friendly and work hard. In the free evening, my neighborhoods usually gather and talk together. I love my hometown a lot. I think no matter how far I can go but my hometown is always a place where I would like to come back.
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city which is a province in central
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VietNam
. In here, the weather has 2 distinct seasons. In the summer, it is
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very
hot and in the winter, it is
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very
cool. This place is
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often
suffered with storms and floods that the winter
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comes
on. I like the summer, I don’t like the winter.
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I am afraid of
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cold
. Near my
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house
, there is a
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beach
that name
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khe
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hai
’. It takes me fifteen minutes from my
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house
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.
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Now
I’m living and working in
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hcm
city
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happy to
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back my
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hometown
in the summer. I can go to
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beach
. The most my favorite thing is
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do
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excerise
with my bike from my
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to the
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beach
in the early morning. I
usually
wake up at 4h30 a. m. I can
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see
sunset in the
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beach
that is
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very
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beautiful
.
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there
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beach
two twice a day.
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my skin
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get
brown.
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I am not scary. There is a truth.
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i
don’t know to swim
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live
near the
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. The sunshine in my
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is hotter than
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HCM
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in here there are
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trees and not
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I feel more comfortable. There are
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many
fields that are
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poetic. The air is
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fresh and clean. In recent years, there are
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many
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companies
that grow up. I feel that the air
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Mũi
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ba
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delicious food as
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people
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friendly and work
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. In the free evening, my neighborhoods
usually
gather and talk together. I
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a lot. I
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think
no matter how far I can go
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my
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is always a place where I would like to
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come
back.
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IELTS essay Describe your hometown or place you used to live

Essay
  American English
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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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