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owing a home rather than renting it

owing a home rather than renting it 0Mnan

For some societies, people prefer to buy an accommodation instead of paying rents for several point of views. In my opinion, I believe that it is a positive thing to live in your own place. Owning a home is considered as a positive idea as it have several advantages over renting. Firstly, achieving settlement and comfort feelings for the owners as they invest their money for something to be consumed. For example, the owner never lose because the lands prices have been increasing with time. However, the big business departements usually own lands for long periods to sell them with a high profit. In addition, people also feel comfort with the things belongs to them. Several researches have revealed that most people feel excited when they own things rather than using things which they borrow. Secondly, owners are mostly not involved in judgement problems. They face rarely a conflicts with surrounding as they supervise carefully things related to the home. For more illustration to this point, people pay always bills without being late in addition to keen on the fast repairing for broken parts. Another example, Women gaurantee their rights when they leave their guilty husbands and judgment support also these by giving the owned home to them. According to some scientific researches, the wedding rate has been increased since law of preserving women accommodation rights were revealed in last decades. In conclusion, owing the personal accommodation is considered for most people as the suitable decision for comfort life than paying for shelter. In my opinion, that owning the home is better than renting it.

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some
 societies, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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an accommodation
instead
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several point
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positive
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live
 in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 place.

Owning a home is considered
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positive
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idea
 as it have several advantages over renting. Firstly
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. For example
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because
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big
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departements
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
also
 feel comfort with the things belongs to them. Several researches have revealed that most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 feel excited when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 things rather
 than using things which they borrow.

Secondly
, owners are mostly
 not involved in judgement problems. They The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'face'.rarely face
face rarely
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a conflicts
 with surrounding as they supervise carefully
 things related to the home. For more illustration to this point, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 pay always bills without being late in addition
 to keen on the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 repairing for broken parts. Another example, Women Possible spelling mistake found.guarantee
gaurantee
 their rights when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 their guilty husbands and Do not mix variants of the same word ('judgment' and 'judgement') within a single text.judgement
judgment
 support also
 these by giving the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
 home to them. According to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 scientific researches, the wedding rate has been increased
 since law of preserving women accommodation rights were revealed
 in last decades.

In conclusion
, owing the personal accommodation is considered
 for most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 as the suitable decision for comfort life than paying for shelter. In my opinion, that owning the home is better than renting it. 