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Car has more disadvantages than advantage in these,days

Car has more disadvantages than advantage in these, days mLW5K
It is claimed by section of society car have more disadvantages than advantage. I will discuss the merits and demerits of it in forthcoming paragraphs. Commencing with, there are several advantage of car in daily useage vehicle. Firstly, car have been maded to help people in difficult tasks because, car is more comfortable vehicle as compare to other transportation vehicle. Although, there are many cars are available for everyone but many people belong from middle class family they cannot buy expensive cars. Moreover, car has more helpful for us. People can easily reach at their destination by car as wait long time to public transport vehicle. For instance, a survey conducted by tata motors company have been soled maximum cars in 2019. As a result an emergency any problem on people in night car is much important that situation. On the other hand, the primary disadvantages of car on our environment such as air pollution and so on. Which have harmful for people mostly impact on older and children health. Much cause on people who are health problems such as asthma and etcetra other diseases. Moving further, if people have three and two car at home which effect on their daily basis budget and their income because and their income because car need petrol and at present scenario petrol and diesel have on peak level. In conclusion, given aforementioned information quite evident that car have both advantages and disadvantages. People should be used car in limit it will be beneficial for them
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is claimed
by section of society
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car
have more disadvantages than advantage. I will discuss the merits and demerits of it in forthcoming paragraphs.

Commencing with, there are
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several advantage
of
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car
in daily
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useage
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vehicle
.
Firstly
,
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car
have been
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maded
to
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help
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people
in difficult tasks
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because
,
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car
is more comfortable
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vehicle
as compare to other transportation
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vehicle
. Although, there are
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many
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cars
are available for everyone
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but
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many
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people
belong from middle
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class
family they cannot
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buy
expensive
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cars
.
Moreover
,
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car
has more helpful for us.
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People
can
easily
reach at their destination by
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car
as wait long time to public transport
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vehicle
.
For instance
, a survey conducted by
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tata motors
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company
have
been soled
maximum
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cars
in 2019.
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As
a result an emergency any problem on
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people
in night
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car
is much
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important
that situation.

On the other hand
, the primary disadvantages of
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car
on our environment such as air pollution and
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so
on. Which have harmful for
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people
mostly
impact on older and children health. Much cause on
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people
who are health problems such as asthma and
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etcetra
other diseases. Moving
further
, if
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people
have three and two
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car
at home which effect on their daily basis budget and their income
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because
and their income
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because
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car
need petrol and at present scenario petrol and diesel have on peak level.

In conclusion
,
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given
aforementioned information quite evident that
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car
have both advantages and disadvantages.
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People
should be
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used
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car
in limit it will be beneficial for
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them
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IELTS essay Car has more disadvantages than advantage in these, days

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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