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Climate change is now and except to your plan but there is not enough political action to control act 2011 population

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Lagree that the fashion industry is wasteful. Every season, the major fashton houses generate popular styles and colors, and people buy clothes in order look and feel up to date Every time we walch T shows from he pust we com tell how old they are because of the clothes Most people have loo many clother in their wardrobes, not because they need or wear all of them but often becaue they are clothes that are no longer fashionable and so are no longer worn. Thie Is wasteful especially if those clothes are not given Of courses, there are classic styles which are more durable - denim jeans, for example, are worn by all oges in all countries and still seem to feel fashionable Certain shoes styles, sweaters and coats are also timeless. Young people, however, are often searching for their sente of self and ike to experiment dress, or with new look They are vulnerable to exploitation by fashion and it is to these people that the industry directs much of its marketing Fashion wear is also elitist, in the sense that only wealthy people quality designer clothes, classic styles, on the ofher hand, are often cheoper und available to people. There is a risk of standardization with only limited choice and a small range of styles, but individuals can be creative with accessories like scarves rather than huying expensive, ephemeral items of clothing Usually when you ask people about their favorite clothes, they mentiom not their most fashionable items but those that are the most comfortable, or these items have become almost part of them. It would thus be much beter to use scare natural resources like cotton or wool to produce more durable classie clothing styles which are long lasting and enuble people to economies 1308 Words
Lagree
that the fashion industry is wasteful. Every season, the major
fashton
houses
generate popular
styles
and colors, and
people
buy
clothes
in order look and feel up to date Every time we
walch
T
shows
from he
pust
we com
tell
how
old
they are
because
of the
clothes
Most
people
have loo
many
clother
in their wardrobes, not
because
they need or wear all of them
but
often
becaue
they are
clothes
that are no longer fashionable and
so
are no longer worn.
Thie
Is wasteful
especially
if those
clothes
are not
given
Of courses, there are classic
styles
which are more durable
-
denim jeans,
for example
,
are worn
by all
oges
in all countries and
still
seem to feel fashionable Certain shoes
styles
, sweaters and coats are
also
timeless. Young
people
,
however
, are
often
searching for their
sente
of self and
ike
to experiment dress, or with new look They are vulnerable to exploitation by fashion and it is to these
people
that the industry directs much of its marketing Fashion wear is
also
elitist, in the sense that
only
wealthy
people
quality designer
clothes
, classic
styles
, on the
ofher
hand, are
often
cheoper
und
available to
people
. There is a
risk
of standardization with
only
limited choice and a
small
range of
styles
,
but
individuals can be creative with accessories like scarves
rather
than
huying
expensive, ephemeral items of clothing
Usually
when you ask
people
about their favorite
clothes
, they
mentiom
not their most fashionable items
but
those that are the most comfortable, or these items have become almost part of them. It would
thus
be much
beter
to
use
scare natural resources like cotton or wool to produce more durable
classie
clothing
styles
which are
long lasting
and
enuble
people
to economies 1308
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IELTS essay Climate change is now and except to your plan but there is not enough political action to control act 2011 population

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
299 words
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