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Overweight is a big concern so that is the reason?

Overweight is a big concern so that is the reason? Lr3bV
It is a bitter truth that lots of people are suffering from chronic diseases like blood pressure, obesity due to overweight. There are myraid reasons behind this deplorable condition. This essay will highlight some major causes and provide few solutions to overcome from it. However, doctors are not diagnose the disease on time and make huge concern in near future. Is overweight only responsible for any individual's health? First of all, lack of physical activity in daily routine is a primary reason for the overweight issue. Moreover, technology and automation revolution make people's life effortless. In other words, adolescents have been more addicted for fast food such as Chinese food and eat pizza and burger which will make them more unhealthy while adults are more focus on normal diet due to disorderness and they are only interested for rudimentary meals. On the other hand, society have been organised various health camps but people are not interested to attend and take it lightly but this will helpful for their health not others. For example, in India, government has conducted various program for everyone but is is not only any individual responsibility. Taking the fruits or ample vegetable in the diet and avoid junk food. In conclusion, overweight is a serious issue but it can be control by taking approciate action and spread awareness for healthy environment. According to me, everyone's understanding is obligatory and take proper medicine before making it major concern in future and this can happen because of human error.
It is a bitter truth that lots of
people
are suffering from chronic diseases like blood pressure, obesity due to
overweight
. There are
myraid
reasons behind this deplorable condition. This essay will highlight
some
major causes and provide few solutions to overcome from it.
However
, doctors are not
diagnose
the disease on time and
make
huge concern in near future. Is
overweight
only
responsible for any individual's health?

First of all
, lack of physical activity in daily routine is a primary reason for the
overweight
issue.
Moreover
, technology and automation revolution
make
people
's life effortless.
In other words
, adolescents have been more addicted for
fast
food such as Chinese food and eat pizza and burger which will
make
them more unhealthy while adults are more focus on normal diet due to
disorderness and
they are
only
interested for
rudimentary meals.

On the other hand
, society have been
organised
various health camps
but
people
are not interested to attend and take it
lightly
but
this will helpful for their health not others.
For example
, in India,
government
has conducted various program for everyone
but
is is
not
only
any individual responsibility. Taking the fruits or ample vegetable in the diet and avoid junk food.

In conclusion
,
overweight
is a serious issue
but
it can be control by taking
approciate
action and spread awareness for healthy environment.
According to me
,

everyone'
s understanding
is obligatory and take proper medicine
before
making it major concern in future and this can happen
because
of human error.
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IELTS essay Overweight is a big concern so that is the reason?

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