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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. v.2

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. v. 2
One of the major challenges being faced by the cities is the geometric rate at which people migrate from rural settlements to urban centers. This, however, has been found to manifest with attendant consequences such as difficulty in waste management as well as health deterioration of the inhabitants of these cities. Solutions to these problems will also be proffered in the sequel of this write-up. First and foremost, due to the rising population in the cities, statistics have shown that it has become increasingly difficult to control and manage wastes generated from various households in the metropolises. Wastes such as food remnants, polythene bags as well as plastics have been found to constitute about 80% of these wastes. However, to nip this in the bud, each household has a responsibility of having their refuse disposal bags and containers at their disposal while the government also assists in providing door-to-door waste management services to convey these wastes to dump sites at the outskirt of the city. Furthermore, owing to overcrowding which results in competition for the available oxygen in the atmosphere, cases of communicable diseases have become epidemic amongst cities’ inhabitants. Viral diseases such as flu and tuberculosis have become almost impossible to eradicate as a result of this phenomenon. In this regard, the government is saddled with the responsibility of creating a housing plan with a fundamental intent of opening-up the undeveloped and less developed areas. This will drastically free-up some of the densely populated areas within the city while also reducing the incidence of disease epidemic. In conclusion, with conscious efforts by the citizens and government alike, challenges associated with overpopulation of the urban areas are quite surmountable and manageable in order to make the cities more habitable.
One of the major challenges
being faced
by the
cities
is the geometric rate at which
people
migrate from rural settlements to urban centers. This,
however
, has
been found
to manifest with attendant consequences such as difficulty in
waste
management
as well
as health deterioration of the inhabitants of these
cities
. Solutions to these problems will
also
be proffered
in the sequel of this write-up.

First
and foremost, due to the rising population in the
cities
, statistics have shown that it has become
increasingly
difficult to control and manage
wastes
generated from various households in the metropolises.
Wastes
such as food remnants, polythene bags
as well
as plastics have
been found
to constitute about 80% of these
wastes
.
However
, to nip this in the bud, each household has a responsibility of having their refuse disposal bags and containers at their disposal while the
government
also
assists in providing door-to-door
waste
management services to convey these
wastes
to dump sites at the outskirt of the city.

Furthermore
, owing to overcrowding which results in competition for the available oxygen in the atmosphere, cases of communicable diseases have become epidemic amongst
cities’
inhabitants. Viral diseases such as flu and tuberculosis have become almost impossible to eradicate
as a result
of this phenomenon. In this regard, the
government
is saddled
with the responsibility of creating a housing plan with a fundamental intent of opening-up the undeveloped and less developed areas. This will
drastically
free-up
some of the
densely
populated areas within the city while
also
reducing the incidence of disease epidemic.

In conclusion
, with conscious efforts by the citizens and
government
alike, challenges associated with overpopulation of the urban areas are quite surmountable and manageable in order to
make
the
cities
more habitable.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. v. 2

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4 paragraphs
289 words
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