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Overpopulation is increasing at irreversible pace everywhere in the world. In order to control this, it is high time

Overpopulation is increasing at irreversible pace everywhere in the world. In order to control this, it is high time WY9WD

There is no doubt that overpopulation is one of the most pressing problems that many countries are facing these days. However, I do not agree that the government must impose financial penalties for having more than a certain number of children. To begin with, imposing monetary penalty will end up in an unbalanced ratio of sex. Because of the traditional preference for male heirs, many couples might abort female fetuses with the hope of having a male child. What happened in China in past few decades is the best example of such screwed up

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