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Overpopulation in urban areas cause a number of problems.

Overpopulation in urban areas cause a number of problems. dl7mr
In many societies these days, people are concerned about the issue of radiply growing population in urban areas. This essay will suggest some practical solutions to tackle this problem and two big issues that can cause overpopulation will be examined in forthcoming paragraphs. Firstly, the major problem associated with overpopulation in urban places is providing house facilities for its citizens. To be more precise, the lack of decent accommodation is a growing issue when a number of people are unable to find a place to live. Another logical reason would be leading to serious environmental problems such as air pollution and a sufficient amount of garbage. In other words, the first result of overpopulation in towns is traffic congestion and jams mostly means hundreds of cars and any type of vehicle will be constantly releasing their toxic gases into the air, as a result, air would be extremely polluted and may touch a danger level. In terms of garbage, many cities may not handle the charge of rubbish cast away by its inhabitants. However, the problems mentioned above may effectively be solved by the government's interruption. Authorities should take the question of overpopulation into the consideration and improve the current situation. Firstly, they may make the use of funs and contribute them to construct more houses in residential areas in order to provide them to migrated ones. Residents of big cities may rent two or one room in their houses for students from other places. As a final point, although overpopulation is still the major problem and gain public attention, leading to a number of issues. Nevertheless, only the government and residents can may those upcoming problems on their own.
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societies these days,
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people
are concerned
about the
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radiply
growing population in urban areas. This essay will suggest
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some
practical solutions to tackle this
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problem
and two
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big
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issues
that can cause
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overpopulation
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in forthcoming paragraphs.

Firstly
, the major
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problem
associated with
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overpopulation
in urban places is providing
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house
facilities for its citizens. To be more precise, the lack of decent accommodation is a growing
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issue
when a number of
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people
are unable to find a place to
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live
. Another logical reason would be leading to serious environmental
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problems
such as air pollution and a sufficient amount of garbage.
In other words
, the
first
result of
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overpopulation
in towns is traffic congestion and jams
mostly
means hundreds of cars and any type of vehicle will be
constantly
releasing their toxic gases into the air,
as a result
, air would be
extremely
polluted and may touch a
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danger
level. In terms of garbage,
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many
cities may not handle the charge of rubbish cast away by its inhabitants.

However
, the
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problems
mentioned above may
effectively
be solved
by the
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government
's interruption. Authorities should take the question of
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overpopulation
into the consideration and
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improve
the
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current
situation.
Firstly
, they may
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make
the
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use
of
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funs
and contribute them to construct more
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houses
in residential areas in order to provide them to migrated ones. Residents of
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big
cities may rent two or one room in their
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houses
for students from other places.

As a final point, although
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overpopulation
is
still
the major
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problem
and gain public attention, leading to a number of
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issues
.
Nevertheless
,
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only
the
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government
and residents can may those upcoming
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problems
on their
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own
.
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IELTS essay Overpopulation in urban areas cause a number of problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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