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: Application of study Permit

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I am Micky Antony, from Kerala, India, writing this for the purpose of study permit, having received the letter of acceptance from Loyalist College in Toronto-Victoria Park Campus, Canada for a two-year program of Post Graduate Diploma in Quality Engineering Management; student ID: 500208807, DLI NO: O264223510342. I have been working as Assistant Engineer in construction sector for 4 years and have been exposed mainly to the technical aspects and concepts related to maintaining quality assurance standards for projects
I am Micky Antony, from Kerala, India, writing this for the purpose of study permit, having received the letter of acceptance from Loyalist College in Toronto-Victoria Park Campus, Canada for a two-year program of Post Graduate Diploma in Quality Engineering Management; student ID: 500208807, DLI NO: O264223510342.

I have been working as Assistant Engineer in construction sector for 4 years and have
been exposed
mainly
to the technical aspects and concepts related to maintaining quality assurance standards for projects
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IELTS essay : Application of study Permit

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  American English
2 paragraphs
78 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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