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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.

The widespread use of internet, like other kinds of new technologies, has pros and cons in our daily life, but, nowadays, internet is an inseparable part of our life and we cannot imagine living without internet. It is believed the internet enhances the quality of life and made almost every work easier than the past. So, I strongly believe that overall it is beneficial in every aspect of our life and society especially in terms of education and communication as well as improving democracy. To begin with, internet facilitates education to be widespread. Yet, living far and in hard accessing places deprived individuals of education, but now, by increasing coverage of internet around the world, every student with a computer or even a smart phone just has one click distance to school. Moreover, even in big cities and advanced countries, it is possible that an unpredictable event such as a disease epidemic prevents students from attending in school for a while. In such a bad situations, by accessing internet education and continue. For instance, recent covid-19 pandemic deprived student of face to face education, nevertheless online education let individuals to continue studying. So by accessing internet nothing can stop learning.

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