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Describe a time you solved a problem through the Internet. You should say: What the problem was? How did you solve this problem? How long did it took to solve the problem? How did you feel about it?

well, nowadays the internet is the basic need for everyone to explore the world and solve problems. I would like to share my experience. I usually go anywhere by my personal car. I was going to Udaipur last three month ago at night time suddenly my car headlight was not working and there was hevy rain so I couldn't see anymore on road. My family members worried about how to reached our destination? Suddenly I thought one idea in night time Internet had a good option to replace a mechanic resolving a basic problem and I searched about how to resolve that problem? I searched that video and he explained about problem and resolved. he guided to me checking bulb and fuse on dashboard as well as location of dashboard. I was also checking all fuses and car headlight bulb but car headlight fuse was damaged. I was worried and I was not having any spare fuse so I searched for another video of using the same fuse. In that video guided to me and suddenly that using same trick of used fuse at a time. car headlight was working again I resolved that problem in couple of minutes after that we reached our destination. I am thankful to that guys who made that video and helped me through the internet.
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well
, nowadays the internet is the basic need for everyone to explore the world and solve
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problems
. I would like to share my experience.

I
usually
go anywhere by my personal
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car
.
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I
was going to Udaipur last three month ago at
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night time
suddenly
my
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car
headlight was not working and there was
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hevy
rain
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so
I couldn't
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see
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anymore
on road. My family members worried about how to reached our destination?
Suddenly
I
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thought
one
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idea
in
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night time
Internet had a
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good
option to replace a mechanic resolving a basic
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problem
and I searched about how to resolve that
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problem
? I searched that
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video and
he
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explained
about
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problem
and resolved.
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he
guided to me checking bulb and
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fuse
on dashboard
as well
as location of dashboard. I was
also
checking all
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fuses
and
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car
headlight bulb
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but
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car
headlight
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fuse
was damaged
. I was
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worried and
I was not having any spare
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fuse
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so
I searched for another
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video
of using the same
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fuse
. In that
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video
guided to me and
suddenly
that using same trick of
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used
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fuse
at a time.
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car
headlight was working again I resolved that
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problem
in couple of minutes after that we reached our destination. I am thankful to that guys who made that
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video
and
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helped
me through the internet.
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IELTS essay Describe a time you solved a problem through the Internet. You should say: What the problem was? How did you solve this problem? How long did it took to solve the problem? How did you feel about it?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
221 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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