Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

over population in most urban centres is becoming a major problem worldwide. what are the causes of this problem? And how can they be solved? state your opinion.

over population in most urban centres is becoming a major problem worldwide. what are the causes of this problem? And how can they be solved? state your opinion. kjJqN
Population is an asset for a country. it can become a burden when it creates problems. In most towns over population is becoming a major problem world wide. This essay will discuss in details the causes and the solutions of this problem. Centralization is the main cause of being over crodwing in the metropolitans. We can see, it is becoming a tendency city in a centralize way. A city centre is sarrounded by all the facalities which a citizen needs. As an example, if we see Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh, it has all major offices, education centres shopping malls, different types of export and import centres, head offices of different industries, airports of this courtry. As a result people from all over the country are moving towards Dhaka to fulfill their demands such as education or treatment in a good manner or in a better and advance way. A remedy to the cause, government should decentralize every citizen privileges as well as connect them with proper and rapid transportation system. As an instance, the airports can be situated outside of the urban centres. People living in urban, sub-urban and rural areas can use them with proper implementation of roadways and railways. Another example can be the different ministries or head offices. The ministry of forest or the ministry of river should be located in their respective areas. Many people are connected with these ministries so decentralization of ministry offices can be another solution. As different types of offices will be moving towards sub-usban and rural areas, it will acelerate the process of Inhabitation in that regions. As be a result many opportunities will be created there. So, people don't have to move to metropolitan areas. To conclude, goverment should emphasize on decentralization process to solve the Population problem.
Population is an asset for a country.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
can become a burden when it creates problems. In most towns over population is becoming a major problem
Did you mean "worldwide"?
world wide
. This essay will discuss in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
the causes and the solutions of this problem.

Centralization is the main cause of being over
Possible spelling mistake found.
crodwing
in the metropolitans. We can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
, it is becoming a tendency city in
After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'centralize' is correct. If 'centralize' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a centralize
way. A city
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
is
Possible spelling mistake found.
sarrounded
by all the
Possible spelling mistake found.
facalities
which a citizen needs. As an example, if we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
Dhaka, the capital of Bangladesh, it has all major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offices
, education
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
shopping malls,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
types of export and import
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
, head
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offices
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
industries, airports of this
Possible spelling mistake found.
courtry
.
As a result
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
from all over the country are moving towards Dhaka to fulfill their demands such as education or treatment in a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
manner or in a better and advance way.

A remedy to the cause,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should decentralize every citizen privileges
as well
as connect them with proper and rapid transportation system. As an instance, the airports can
be situated
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".
outside of
the urban
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
living in urban, sub-urban and rural areas can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
them with proper

implementation of roadways and railways. Another example can be the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
ministries or head
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offices
. The ministry of forest or the ministry of river should
be located
in their respective areas.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are connected
with these ministries
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
decentralization of ministry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offices
can be another solution. As
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
different
types of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offices
will be moving towards
Possible spelling mistake found.
sub-usban
and rural areas, it will
Possible spelling mistake found.
acelerate
the process of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Inhabitation
in that regions.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
be a result
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
opportunities will
be created
there.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
don't
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to metropolitan areas.

To conclude
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
goverment
should emphasize on decentralization process to solve the Population problem.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay over population in most urban centres is becoming a major problem worldwide. what are the causes of this problem? And how can they be solved? state your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • over population in most urban centres is becoming a major problem worldwide. what are the causes of this problem? And how can they be solved? state your opinion.