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Over population agree or disagree

Over population agree or disagree QVdDX

Today's population of the world is reached up to 7 billion. it is a huge rise of human resources and it offers enormous benifits to the country. Though there are a numerous negatives In my point of view, over population seems to be good for the development of the country by getting enough people for employment and obtaining tax from various methods. First of all, nations are full filling the requirements of the needy people by deducting the taxes from various sources. For instance, poor people grant pension and other public welfare like road construction, and educational industry development, medical insurance are all been provided for the citizens through this. In addition to this, employment opportunity has to be increased and government acquires adequate number of job seekers from home country. For example, recently corona virus spread all over the world, during this time, well populated countries has had experienced professionals enormously to fight with this pandemic. While other were recruited from overseas to battle with this situation. On contrary, There are a numerous negatives are presant along with this positives. They are people would not get enough environmental resources like food and land for survival. Thereby, they could be move on to another place for existence. Similarly, qualified people's would be increased as a result job opportunities might be decreased. In conclusion, the growth of the country depends on number of people residing in and how is their employment. how they used their resources effectively with out any wastage.

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Today
's population of the world is reached
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In my point of view, over population seems to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for the development of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 by getting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 for employment and obtaining tax from various methods.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, nations are full The usual prepositions to use after "filling" is 'with' not "the" Did you mean "filling the requirements with"?filling the requirements with
filling the requirements of
 the needy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 by deducting the taxes from various sources. For instance
, poor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 grant pension and other public welfare like road construction, and educational industry development, medical insurance are all been provided
 for the citizens through this. In addition
 to this, employment opportunity This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
be increased
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 acquires adequate number of job seekers from home You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
. For example
, recently The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.coronavirus
corona virus
 spread all over the world, during this time, well populated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 has had experienced professionals enormously
 to fight with this pandemic. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 other were recruited
 from overseas to battle with this situation.

On contrary, There are a numerous Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "negative"?negative
negatives
 are Possible spelling mistake found.presentpres ant
presant
 along with Did you mean "these"?these
this
 positives. They are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 would not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 environmental resources like food and land for survival. Thereby, they could be Consider using a past participle here: "moved".moved
move
 on to another place for existence. Similarly
, qualified This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's would be increased
as a result
 job opportunities might be decreased
.

In conclusion
, the growth of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 depends on number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 residing in and how is their employment. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHow
how
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 their resources effectively
This word is usually written together. Did you mean "without"?without
with out
 any wastage. 