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What is a family? Describe your opinion.

What is a family? Describe your opinion. x2oyb
A family means sharing good or bad things in our daily routine and it’s a gift from God. Everyone must value their own family because it can’t be substituted with outsiders. Family likes a tree. To grow up healthily, a tree needs to work all their functions in respective positions. Like a tree, every members of a family need to combine and support each other to develop economy, health, education, etc. Whether big or small family, warm or broken family, you cannot choose but you can adjust with your family. Looking at you, can tell that how you grow up. Your character can reflect how your family is. Most families live together while others can’t for some reasons. People say that “Blood is thicker than water”. It’s really true that although we have fighting sometimes, family will always support you, comfort you in your hard times and forgive you what kind of mistakes you made and love you unconditionally. We cannot choose and cannot replace family, so adjust each other to be harmonized. If not you will be a black sheep in your family and will be neglected. When you have a family, there are 3 duties that you have to do. Firstly, you have to take care of elderly persons and secondly, you must be dutiful in your family. Finally, you need to foster your young generation. So, Family members need to take care both physically and mentally and share each other emotions and daily life experiences throughout the life. It can be lonely, stressful and meaningless without having family.
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means sharing
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good
or
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bad
things in our daily routine and it’s a gift from God. Everyone
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must
value their
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own
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family
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because
it can’t
be substituted
with outsiders.

Family likes a tree. To grow up
healthily
, a tree
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needs
to work all their functions in respective positions. Like a tree, every
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members
of a
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family
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need
to combine and support each
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other
to develop economy, health, education, etc. Whether
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big
or
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small
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family
, warm or broken
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family
, you cannot choose
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but
you can adjust with your
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family
. Looking at you, can
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tell
that how you grow up. Your character can reflect how your
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family
is. Most
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families
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live
together while others can’t for
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some
reasons.

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People
say that “Blood is thicker than water”. It’s
really
true that although we have fighting
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sometimes
,
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family
will always support you, comfort you in your
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hard
times and forgive you what kind of mistakes you made and
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love
you
unconditionally
. We cannot choose and cannot replace
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family
,
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so
adjust each
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other
to
be harmonized
. If not you will be a black sheep in your
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family
and will
be neglected
. When you have a
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family
, there are 3 duties that you
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have to
do.
Firstly
, you
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have to
take care of elderly persons and
secondly
, you
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must
be dutiful in your
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family
.
Finally
, you
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need
to foster your young generation.

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So
,
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Family
members
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need
to take care both
physically
and mentally and share each
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other
emotions and daily life experiences throughout the life. It can be lonely, stressful and meaningless without having
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family
.
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IELTS essay What is a family? Describe your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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