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Bringing up a child is a sole responsibility for mother, on the other hand, it’s also up to father’s activity. Discuss both versions.

Bringing up a child is a sole responsibility for mother, on the other hand, it’s also up to father’s activity. VlRoK

Taking care of a child is the accountability of a mother as well as the obligations of a father. Both are playing a critical role in the developing of their children mentally and physically. Mother is the one who has close relationship with children and can understand the baby language and give guidelines and regards as the first teacher of their lives. Most of them are housewives and they have to take care of their children in personally. Since giving birth, mother is the one breastfeeding and motherhood is not as easy as we think. Once the baby is crawling, mother is following after him not to fall down and prevents from danger. Once grow up, she cooks meals and prepares everything to go to school. So, mother is essential person in their lives. Meanwhiles, father is the breadwinner of the family and financially support the family to stay peacefully. They are the idols of the children, who can give secure sense and strength. But in modern days, raising up a child is the couple’s job and although both are working, and they perform equally their duties. So, both adjust each other, and look after the children in their free time to create a lovely world. By exemplified with my family, father was working whole week and mother is housewife. Although he is busy, he polishes my education and gives me instructions. Whatever I encounter problems, he is my one and only advisor. To sum up, Father and mother are look like the right and left hands. To perform everything well, both need to cooperate well to finish the functions.

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mother
as well
 as the obligations of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
. Both are playing a critical role in the developing of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 mentally and physically
.

Mother is the one who has close relationship with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
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. Most of them are Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).housewives, and
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have to
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children
 in personally
. Since giving birth, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 is the one breastfeeding and motherhood is not as easy as we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
. Once the baby is crawling, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 is following after him not to fall down and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precludes
prevents
 from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardrisk
danger
. Once grow up, she cooks meals and prepares everything to go to school. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 is essential person in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
.

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Meanwhiles
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 is the breadwinner of the family and financially
 support the family to stay peacefully
. They are the idols of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
, who can give secure sense and strength. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in modern days, raising up a child is the couple’s job and although both are working, and they perform equally
 their duties. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, both adjust each other, and look after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 in their free time to create a lovely world. By exemplified with my family, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 was working whole week and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 is housewife. Although he is busy, he polishes my education and gives me instructions. Whatever I encounter problems, he is my one and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 advisor.

To sum up, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
Father
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 are look like the right and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 hands. To perform everything well, both need to cooperate well to finish the functions. 