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Our previous experiment showed that Avicennia marina’s leaf collected from Ekowisata Mangrove Wonorejo contained endophytes.

Our previous experiment showed that Avicennia marina’s leaf collected from Ekowisata Mangrove Wonorejo contained endophytes. 25bAk
Our previous experiment showed that Avicennia marina’s leaf collected from Ekowisata Mangrove Wonorejo contained endophytes. The endophytes were known as bacteria which were demonstrated by biochemical tests based on Bergey’s manual of determinative bacteriology. This experiment aimed to characterize the three isolates of bacteria by using DNA sequencing. The result showed that isolate 1 and 2 were known as Bacillus subtilis with a different strain, whereas isolate 3 was considered as Bacillus sp. It was in line with the result of biochemical tests. To know the sensitivity of three isolates against antibiotics, we used a 30 µg tetracycline disc on Nutrient Agar that was overgrown by the isolate. The results showed that halo was observed on three isolates, meaning that all of them were sensitive to 30 µg tetracycline.
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against antibiotics, we
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IELTS essay Our previous experiment showed that Avicennia marina’s leaf collected from Ekowisata Mangrove Wonorejo contained endophytes.

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