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This is difficult to answer because I believe that is relative, we need to consider the child's personality, he can be more influenced by parents or by classmates, it is relative! But I am more inclined to agree with the statement because kids spend more time at school than at house with their parents. Thus it is easier to copy their friends' behaviors, being good or not. Although parents giving the best advice and being the best example, their friends have the same age and have the same way of thinking so it is easy to do the same that they do and the success at school can be totally liked with this.
This is difficult to answer
because
I believe
that is
relative, we need to consider the child's personality, he can be more influenced by parents or by classmates, it is relative!
But
I am more inclined to
agree
with the statement
because
kids spend more time at school than at
house
with their parents.
Thus
it is easier to copy their friends' behaviors, being
good
or not. Although parents giving the best advice and being the best example, their friends have the same age and have the same way of thinking
so
it is easy to do the same that they do and the success at school can be
totally
liked with this.
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1 paragraphs
113 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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