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Opinions are divided on whether newspapers or other forms of media

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Opinions are divided on whether newspapers or other forms of media, like the Internet are the dominant method in acquiring news. Personally, I agree with those who advocate online-platforms are indeed superior to that traditional version. Admittedly, the idea of considering newspapers as the foremost way to get news is justifiable. This is predicated on the assumption that such a measure would provide people with a more reliable source of information. Take, for example, a piece of news on newspapers before being taken to publication is often written by professional journalists, carefully checked and edited to ensure the acuracy. Undoubtedly, if people are constantly exposed to fake news that spreading widely on the other media, especially the Internet, they are much more likely to have misconception and unexpected worries. Therefore, many people argue that this traditional method still holds the most popular position among readers. However, there are good reasons to say that the advantages of online news significantly surpass those of newspapers. Chief of these is that the omnipresence and the availability of the internet devices have boosted the popularity of online news to an extent that makes the way of getting news from newspapers become obsolete and inconvenient. Thanks to internet-based platforms, readers can access a huge storage of fast-moving and immediate news updates by only a few clicks. Furthermore, online media can upload videos as opposed to newspapers, which is only able to supply information with written words. For instance, people can watch vivid videos and rewatch them if unfortunately missed with portable devices connected to the Internet. In conclusion, although newspapers are deemed more reliable, I firmly support the tendency that it has been on the wane and no longer the best way to get news due to a superior experience provided by online platforms
Opinions
are divided
on whether
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newspapers
or other forms of media, like the

Internet are the dominant method in acquiring
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news
.
Personally
, I
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agree
with those

who advocate online-platforms are
indeed
superior to that traditional version.

Admittedly
, the
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idea
of considering
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newspapers
as the foremost way to
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get
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news
is

justifiable. This
is predicated
on the assumption that such a measure would provide

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people
with a more reliable source of information. Take,
for example
, a piece of

news on
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newspapers
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before
being taken
to publication is
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often
written by

professional journalists,
carefully
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checked
and edited to ensure the
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acuracy
.

Undoubtedly
, if
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people
are
constantly
exposed to fake
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news
that spreading
widely


on the other media,
especially
the Internet, they are much more likely to have

misconception and unexpected worries.
Therefore
,
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many
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people
argue that this

traditional method
still
holds the most popular position among readers.

However
, there are
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good
reasons to say that the advantages of online news

significantly
surpass those of
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newspapers
. Chief of these is that the omnipresence

and the availability of the internet devices have boosted the popularity of online

news to an extent that
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makes
the way of getting
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news
from
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newspapers
become

obsolete and inconvenient. Thanks to internet-based platforms, readers can access

a huge storage of
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fast
-moving and immediate
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news
updates by
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only
a few clicks.

Furthermore
, online media can upload videos as opposed to
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newspapers
, which is

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only
able to supply information with written words.
For instance
,
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people
can
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watch


vivid videos and
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rewatch
them if unfortunately missed with portable devices

connected to the Internet.

In conclusion
, although
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newspapers
are deemed
more reliable, I
firmly
support the

tendency that it has been on the wane and no longer the best way to
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get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
due

to a superior experience provided by online platforms
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IELTS essay Opinions are divided on whether newspapers or other forms of media

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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