Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

describe an area of your hometown where you grew up

describe an area of your hometown where you grew up peaEy
I live in Tan Phong village and it is my hometown, too. My hometown is a small village but it is very beautiful. It's in the North of Viet Nam. There is a small river around my village. In the summer, children often go here and swim in it. Some fishermen usually catch fish here and take them to the market. There aren't many traffic here but there are many trees here. People are also friendly and kind. In my village, there are many houses such as: two floor houses, one floor house, . . . In the morning, the cock is like an alaem clock for everyone. It crow to everyone get up. The life in my village is vey busy. I love my hometown very much because i have many nice memories with it.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in Tan
Possible spelling mistake found.
Phong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
and it is my hometown, too. My hometown is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
. It's in the North of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Viet
Nam. There is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
river around my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
. In the summer, children
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
go here and swim in it.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
fishermen
usually
catch fish here and take them to the market. There aren't
Possible agreement error. The noun traffic seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much traffic", "a good deal of traffic".
many traffic
here
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
trees here.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
are
also
friendly and kind. In my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
such as:
It appears that a hyphen is missing.
two floor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
,
It appears that a hyphen is missing.
one floor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
Did you just mean "," or "."?
, .
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
In the morning, the cock is like an
Possible spelling mistake found.
alaem
clock for everyone. It
Did you mean "crows"?
crow
to everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "gets", "got".
get
up. The life in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
village
is
Possible spelling mistake found.
vey
busy. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
my hometown
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
nice memories with it.

IELTS essay describe an area of your hometown where you grew up

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
136 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • describe an area of your hometown where you grew up