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Opinion of zoos are cruel and should be closed and other think it is useful protecting wild animals

Opinion of zoos are cruel and should be closed and other think it is useful protecting wild animals YdPdn

There are split opinions regarding zoos numerous of census believe that it can be helpful in protecting wild animals while others think that it is cruel and should be banned. Both the viewpoints with my opinion are described in following paragraphs. To initiate with, the animals habitats are being distroyed by various humans activities such as cutting down of rainforest. It can provide shelter to these animals. Moreover, wild animals live in jungle have to run for hunting otherwise they can be died from hungern. Also, if they get injured then zoos can take care of them. For instance, according to the survey 40%animals save from injury in 2010. On the other hand, some mankinds have reasons for close it. In zoos animals put into cage where they get a limited space for movement. By doing this, they loose their power and they do not much active compare to the forest. Furthermore, some species are under threat, there are plenty of animals which do not fall in this category and who are just entertainment of visitors. For example, animals are sent out to circus where training is provided for public entertainment. In my opinion, it should be banned because individual needs to be independent. The administration should spread awareness among people to protect animals. In conclusion, zoos give batter life to animals by providing food on time however worker of zoos use them for public fun.

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