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If you could travel through time, what would be the first thing you do and why?

If you could travel through time, what would be the first thing you do and why? VYkPD
If I ever come across a time machine, say I really own one in which I can travel to the future and past whatever I want, I would never use it and lose my opportunity to live in the present. The present is far more valueable to me and it is neither the past (history) nor the future (a dream which remains unknown and hidden from me now). Thats the real charm and beauty of life and the charm and beauty of living. neither the past nor the future can ever hold the discovery and excitement of the living present. You may ask whether I would be curious to know about my past of future? No, not at all! Dont you know, curiosity killed the cat? It is best to learn to live in the present. That the most exiciting of all. Talking of the future, if you tarvel to the future and see that your closest friend cheats and murders you and you suffer a terrible and torturous death, what would you do? If you find a glorious future, would you not live through the present to really enjoy the romance of the unknown? But they would never remain unknown if you had a time machine and travelled in it. The romance and beauty would be lost. The future would lose all its lustre. Remaining in the present and always with the moving present is probably the most exciting thing in life. The time machine would be worth absolutely nothing to me. I will surely gift it to you, and free. Please dont curse me when you use it. All those glittering things you imagine about it, will turn into dust instantly. It is like Tithonus asking for the boon of immortality.
If I ever
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across a time machine, say I
really
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one in which I can travel to the
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and
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whatever I want, I would never
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it and lose my opportunity to
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live
in the
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present
. The
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is far more
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valueable
to me and it is neither the
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past
(history) nor the
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(a dream which remains unknown and hidden from me
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).

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the real charm and beauty of life and the charm and beauty of living.
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neither
the
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past
nor the
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can ever hold the discovery and excitement of the living present.

You may ask whether I would be curious to know about my
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past
of
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? No, not at all!
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you know, curiosity killed the cat? It is best to learn to
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in the
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. That the most
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exiciting
of all.

Talking of the
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, if you
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to the
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and
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that your closest friend cheats and murders you and you suffer a terrible and torturous death, what would you do? If you find a glorious
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future
, would you not
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through the
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to
really
enjoy the romance of the unknown?
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But
they would never remain unknown if you had a time machine and travelled in it. The romance and beauty would
be lost
. The
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would lose all its
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lustre
.

Remaining in the
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present
and always with the moving
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present
is
probably
the most exciting thing in life.

The time machine would be worth
absolutely
nothing to me. I will
surely
gift it to you, and free.
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dont
curse me when you
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it. All those glittering things you imagine about it, will turn into dust
instantly
. It is like
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Tithonus
asking for the boon of immortality.
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IELTS essay If you could travel through time, what would be the first thing you do and why?

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293 words
5.5
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