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Opinion about animal life choice

Opinion about animal life choice GrmyL

I totally disagree with this statement. I’m of the opinion that some animals should be kept in zoos because of 2 reasons as follows. Living in the zoo, animals can live in a secure environment, since zoos are built as wildlife sanctuaries which provide quality care for animals and place a higher priority on animal welfare. For example, I’m sure that veterinary and medical care ensure good physical conditions for animals. In addition, zoos provide public entertainment. In other words, they provide communities with an opportunity to observe some rare and endangered species of animals in their natural behaviours. To sum up, although many people consider keeping animals in zoos cruel and inhumane. I strongly believe that it’s the best way for these animals to survive and keep away from danger. We need to protect the animals as soon as we can since it brings many benefits to the environment in particular and people in general.

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