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online shopping advantages and disadvantages

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Technology play an indispensable part in know a day. It makes our life easy and comfortable. In modern era, everybody is busy for minting busy. Their have enough time for going shopping center. Many apps are available in our mobile phone, it is safe our time. Most people preference for online shopping. There are lot of advantages for online shopping. Many company give special offers for regular customers. On the flip side, every coin has two faces. It also have a number of disadvantages,
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our life easy and comfortable. In modern era, everybody is busy for minting busy. Their have
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enough
time for going shopping center.
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Many
apps are available in our mobile phone, it is safe our time. Most
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people
preference for online shopping. There are
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advantages for online shopping.
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company
give special offers for regular customers. On the flip side, every coin has two faces. It
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a number of disadvantages,
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IELTS essay online shopping advantages and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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