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Many choices in humans life. Explain its advantages and disadvantages

Many choices in humans life. Explain its advantages and disadvantages Jl6X6

Nowadays individuals have many choices in there life. This essay will discuss advantages or disadvantages because people have many choices to his lifestyle study and job. To begin with, people have many choices how spend his life and lifestyle. To evaluate it when individuals spend his life to enjoyment and earn money that was his choices. some time individuals choose wrong way that time they are paid heavy cost but they are not under sta

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