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Currently, there are many environmental problems on the Earth. Why it is necessary to inform people about the pressing problems? Whose responsibility is it to prevent further damage?

Currently, there are many environmental problems on the Earth. Why it is necessary to inform people about the pressing problems? Whose responsibility is it to prevent further damage? k6RD8
With the rapid development of humanity in 21 century, many environmental issues took place on our planet. This essay will discuss the importance of educating every person on poignant issues the Earth faces. Moreover, it will explain why the responsibility of future problems lays on everyone. It is crucial to talk about urgent environmental complications in order to reduce the damage and increase the number of sustainably conscious people. As it is observed, some people are not perceiving pressing environmental obstacles as something that might damage their lifestyle and surroundings. Showing everyone atrocious consequences of global warming, natural resource depletion, waste disposal, and loss of biodiversity can lead to a more adequate perception of Earth’s problems, and consequently, humanity will be more aware of their own planet. Furthermore, the number of communities willing to solve dreadful obstacles will rise and our society and humanity as a whole will benefit from it. Many people for sure will be willing to reduce their carbon footprint, as well as conserving the planet in it’s primordial state. Educating people of course is crucial, however, it is also important for everyone to understand that all of us are responsible for the prevention of future damage. It is everyone’s duty to understand that the responsibility on the damage lays on every human being. While it may be percieved that governments are the ones accountable for protection of the environment, in fact it surely is quite the opposite. If everyone starts becoming a bit more sustainable, we surely can tackle all obstacles we face. Some might be thinking: “I won’t be sorting out the trash and recycling it, someone else will and my trash is nothing compared to the whole humanity”. However, everything starts from you, and if everyone will think like that, we will get bogged down in trash. In conclusion, our earth will not last for long, if we won’t educate people about most pressing issues the world faces everyday. It is not only important to educate people, but it is crucial to encourage everyone to be sustainable by reminding that the future of our planet solely depends on us.
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humanity
in
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21 century
,
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many
environmental issues took place on our
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planet
. This essay will discuss the importance of educating every person on poignant issues the Earth faces.
Moreover
, it will
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explain
why the responsibility of future problems
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lays on
everyone.

It is crucial to talk about urgent environmental complications in order to
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reduce
the damage and increase the number of
sustainably
conscious
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people
. As it
is observed
,
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some
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people
are not perceiving pressing environmental obstacles as something that might damage their lifestyle and surroundings. Showing
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everyone
atrocious consequences of global warming, natural resource depletion, waste disposal, and loss of biodiversity can lead to a more adequate perception of Earth’s problems, and
consequently
,
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humanity
will be more aware of their
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own
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planet
.
Furthermore
, the number of communities willing to solve dreadful obstacles will rise and our society and
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humanity
as a whole will benefit from it.
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Many
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people
for sure will be willing to
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reduce
their carbon footprint,
as well
as conserving the
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planet
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in it’s primordial
state. Educating
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people
of course
is crucial,
however
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also
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important
for
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everyone
to understand that all of us are responsible for the prevention of future damage.

It is
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everyone’s
duty to understand that the responsibility on the damage
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lays on
every human being. While it may be
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percieved
that
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governments
are the ones accountable for protection of the environment, in fact it
surely
is quite the opposite. If
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everyone
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starts
becoming a bit more sustainable, we
surely
can tackle all obstacles we face.
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Some
might be thinking: “I won’t be sorting out the trash and recycling it, someone else will and my trash is nothing compared to the whole
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humanity”
.
However
, everything
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starts
from you, and if
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everyone
will
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think
like that, we will
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get
bogged down in trash.

In conclusion
, our earth will not last for long, if we won’t educate
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people
about most pressing issues the world faces
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everyday
. It is not
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only
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important
to educate
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people
,
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but
it is crucial to encourage
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everyone
to be sustainable by reminding that the future of our
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planet
solely
depends on us.
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IELTS essay Currently, there are many environmental problems on the Earth. Why it is necessary to inform people about the pressing problems? Whose responsibility is it to prevent further damage?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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