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Online education are more beneficial than offline. To wht extent do u agree or disagree

Online education are more beneficial than offline. To wht extent do u agree or disagree rlGl
Undoubtedly, it is irrefutable that education plays an imperative role in everyone's life. most of the children prefer online education However others prefer offline education. These essay will highlight that online education have more benefits than offline. To commence with, there are a plethora of benefits of online education. firstly, children can receive personal feedback from teachers which is worthwhile for them as well as they can share their all obstacles with their teachers along with trainer give them feedback and students improve their mistakes one the other hand on offline education sometimes learner can not clear thier whole doubts because they feel ashamed in front of class. secondly, due to online classes children learn with best manner. They can ask any questions from their teachers and clear whole doubts and learn a lot. as a result, online education is more fruitful as compared to offline. Despite a few positive aspects their are some negative points also. With the help of offline education students take advice from other students as well as they also get ideas from children it is beneficial for their further life. moreover, children get a lot of knowledge from teachers offline it is helpful. Henceforth, offline education is also important. To conclude, although offline education is imperative, online education is more worthwhile.
Undoubtedly
, it is irrefutable that
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education
plays an imperative role in everyone's life.
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most
of the
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children
prefer
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online
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education
However
others prefer offline
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education
. These essay will highlight that
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online
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education
have more benefits than offline. To commence with, there are a plethora of benefits of
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online
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education
.
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firstly
,
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children
can receive personal feedback from
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teachers
which is worthwhile for them
as well
as they can share their all obstacles with their
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teachers
along with trainer give them feedback and students
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improve
their mistakes
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one
the other hand on offline
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education
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sometimes
learner can not
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clear
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whole doubts
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because
they feel ashamed in front of
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class
.
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secondly
, due to
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online
classes
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children
learn
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with best
manner. They can ask any questions from their
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teachers
and
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clear
whole doubts and learn a lot.
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as
a result,
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online
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education
is more fruitful as compared to offline. Despite a few
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positive
aspects
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points
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of offline
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education
students take advice from other students
as well
as they
also
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get
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ideas
from
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children
it is beneficial for their
further
life.
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moreover
,
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children
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get
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a lot of
knowledge from
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teachers
offline it is helpful. Henceforth, offline
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education
is
also
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important
.
To conclude
, although offline
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education
is imperative,
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online
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education
is more worthwhile.
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IELTS essay Online education are more beneficial than offline. To wht extent do u agree or disagree

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