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Topic 1: Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution; however, others think there are some other ways.

Topic 1: Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution; however, others think there are some other ways. elAV
Overall the principal reason for air contamination is the burning of petroleum derivatives that drives the modern process. Another reason for air contamination is normal types of transportation like vehicles, planes, and ships which by and large use ignition to tackle energy from fossil fuel. However, air contamination isn't completely fake. Indeed, characteristic cycles, for example, well of lava emissions additionally discharge a ton of harmful substances (sulfur dioxide) into the air. There are different kinds of pollution like soil pollution, but first let's talk about air pollution. The principal reason for air contamination is the burning of petroleum derivatives that drives the mechanical process. Another reason for air contamination is normal types of transportation like vehicles, planes, and ships which for the most part use ignition to tackle energy from petroleum product. And next is soil pollution the primary offender of soil contamination is rural exercises. To have a high harvest yield, ranchers use current residence and manures, which are brimming with synthetics not created in nature and can't be separated. Therefore, they saturate the ground and lessen the fruitfulness of the soil. Another culprit of soil pollution is waste disposal. Both industry and households are contributors to the increasing amount of waste dumped into the environment. And finally is water pollution the principal reason for water pollution in many created networks is because of wastewater and sewage unloaded straight into the ocean or stream. Despite the fact that they are dealt with, they are never equivalent to freshwater. In conlusion we have the first measure to mitigate the problems of pollution is to encourage people to use more public modes of transportation. Secondly, a large amount of fossil fuel is burned to generate electricity, so you can save the environment by reducing the amount of power wasted. For example, it is more environmentally friendly to use energy-efficient devices that consume less electricity. Thirdly, people should not get rid of items that are of no use and should reuse them for different purposes.
Overall
the principal
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reason
for
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air
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contamination
is the burning of petroleum derivatives that drives the modern process. Another
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reason
for
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air
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contamination
is normal types of transportation like vehicles,
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planes
, and ships which by and large
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use
ignition to tackle energy from fossil fuel.
However
,
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air
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contamination
isn't completely fake.
Indeed
, characteristic cycles,
for example
, well of lava emissions
additionally
discharge a ton of harmful substances (sulfur dioxide) into the air.

There are
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different
kinds of
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pollution
like
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soil
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pollution
,
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but
first
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let
's talk about
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air
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pollution
. The principal
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reason
for
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air
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contamination
is the burning of petroleum derivatives that drives the mechanical process. Another
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reason
for
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air
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contamination
is normal types of transportation like vehicles,
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planes
, and ships which
for the most part
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use
ignition to tackle energy from petroleum product. And
next
is
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soil
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pollution
the primary offender of
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soil
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contamination
is rural exercises. To have a high harvest yield, ranchers
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use
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current
residence and manures, which are brimming with synthetics not created in nature and can't
be separated
.
Therefore
, they saturate the ground and lessen the fruitfulness of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
soil
. Another culprit of
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soil
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pollution
is waste disposal. Both industry and households are contributors to the increasing amount of waste dumped into the environment. And
finally
is water
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pollution
the principal
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reason
for water
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pollution
in
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many
created networks is
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because
of wastewater and sewage unloaded straight into the ocean or stream. Despite the fact that they
are dealt
with, they are never equivalent to freshwater.

In
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conlusion
we have the
first
measure to mitigate the problems of
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pollution
is to encourage
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people
to
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use
more public modes of transportation.
Secondly
, a large amount of fossil fuel
is burned
to generate electricity,
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so
you can save the environment by reducing the amount of power wasted.
For example
, it is more
environmentally
friendly to
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use
energy-efficient devices that consume less electricity.
Thirdly
,
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people
should not
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get
rid of items that are of no
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use
and should reuse them for
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different
purposes.
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IELTS essay Topic 1: Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution; however, others think there are some other ways.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
334 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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