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Online education and culture and entertainment

Online education and culture and entertainment k5pm8

To commence with, people will have an access to everything by just one click in the future and won't have to go through so much effort. I completely agree with that. I will elucidate my view point with following arguments. One nuance that should be taken into consideration when it comes to this debate question is the fact that, technology will bring us comfort. come across odd looking pictures that people donot have a limit to touch them isn't enjoyable at all and it's time consuming hence people can easily search about them and utilize the features of the online museum like online tour about the history and culture and galleries and art exhibit in future provide persons by a website that you can purchase any item in a few moments whereas the process of purchasing is very simple as people can pay thorough online banking which is very convenient and about schools there will be a new method of learning which is distance learning furthermore, the communication between teacher and student will be limited. In this case although there are less teacher-student interaction but its benefits out weight it's drawbacks like it's economically efficent and less expenses for students. under graduate can gain a new skill and accumulate their knowledge and libraries will be the online bank as people can lookeup the new and complex words immediately.

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people
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an access
 to everything by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 one click in the future and won't This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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so
 much effort. I completelyPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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with that. I will elucidate my view point with following arguments.

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comes
 to this debate question is the fact that, technology will bring us comfort. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCome
come
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people
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donot
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to touch them isn't enjoyable at all and it'sPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.time-consuming
time consuming
hence
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people
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the features of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 museum like You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 tour about the history and culture and galleries and art exhibit in future provide persons by a website that you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 any item in a few moments whereas the process of purchasingPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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can pay thorough You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 banking which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 convenient and about schools there will be a new methodPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
of learning which is distance learning furthermore
, the communication between teacher and student will be limited
. In this case
 although there are less teacher-student interaction This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 its benefits out weight it's drawbacks like it's economically
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efficent
 and Did you mean "fewer"? The noun expenses is countable.fewer
less
 expenses for students. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterUnder
under
 graduate can gain a new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 and accumulate their knowledge and libraries will be the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
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people
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lookeup
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