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Online courses are indeed becoming a common feature of university education in popularity

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Online courses are indeed becoming a common feature of university education in popularity. despite there are obvious benefits as well as drawbacks to this trend. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why studying online give us more benefits. One major drawback of this trend is that the student might less direct interaction with the lecturer and professor. in other world, students can not discuss the lecture content with their profession if they don’t understand and the result of this is that they would get easily get distracted to spending a lot time on social media or watching youtube. to illustrate the student who studies virtually just turn on their computer or laptop to take attendance and they either go to hang out or continue to sleep. Another issue is that student do not into direct contact with each other, which are obvious disadvantages effect on soft skill such as teamwork, communication, exchange of ideas. These learners may also lack the motivation and element of competition that is directly group work brings and this is particularly concerning for student who take a test on a virtual platform at home, they can commit cheating on exams by this way is using the material, this may lead to a misjudgment of the student’s academic ability. Despite the above mentioned drawbacks, I would argue that online university courses are a positive development. One of the main positives of learning online is that student can record the meeting to listen again the lecture, so that if thay do not understand when the professor has passed lesson once. secondly they don’t have to get up early to prepare essentials for amphitheater, this mean that they will not get stuck in traffic in the morning and it is not much time consuming, so they do not have to pay for transportation and save a large amount of money on maintenance. Finally the fact that universities offer online courses would provide more educational opportunities for students in remote areas where universities are not yet available. for instance many students in Vietnam can exchange and learn more knowledge from students of universities in other countries in this way an increasing number of student are able to gain advanced science knowlegde and technology In conclusion, although styding by means of the internet may have some disadvantages, but it has bring many benefits. this is why I belive that this a posities development overall
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education in popularity.
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despite
there are obvious benefits
as well
as drawbacks to this trend. In this essay, I will discuss
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some of the
reasons why studying
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online
give us more benefits.

One major drawback of this trend is that the
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student
might less direct interaction with the lecturer and professor.
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in
other world,
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students
can not discuss the lecture content with their profession if they don’t understand and the result of this is that they would
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get
easily
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distracted to spending
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a lot time
on social media or watching
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youtube
.
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to
illustrate the
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student
who studies
virtually
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just
turn on their computer or laptop to take
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attendance and
they either go to hang out or continue to sleep. Another issue is that
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student
do not into direct contact with each other, which are obvious disadvantages effect on soft
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skill
such as teamwork, communication, exchange of
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ideas
. These learners may
also
lack the motivation and element of competition
that is
directly
group work brings and this is
particularly
concerning for
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student
who take a
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on a virtual platform at home, they can commit cheating on exams by this way is using the material, this may lead to a misjudgment of the
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student’s
academic ability.

Despite the above mentioned drawbacks, I would argue that
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online
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university
courses are a
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positive
development. One of the main positives of learning
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online
is that
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can record the meeting to listen again the lecture,
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that if
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do not understand when the professor has passed lesson once.
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up early to prepare essentials for amphitheater, this mean that they will not
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stuck in traffic in the morning and it is not much
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time consuming
,
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they do not
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pay for transportation and save a large amount of money on maintenance.
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Finally
the fact that
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universities
offer
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courses would provide more educational opportunities for
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in remote areas where
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students
in Vietnam can exchange and learn more knowledge from
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of
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in other countries in this way an increasing number of
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are able to gain advanced science
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knowlegde
and
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technology


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disadvantages,
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posities
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overall
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IELTS essay Online courses are indeed becoming a common feature of university education in popularity

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
406 words
5.5
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