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Online communication is preferable to face to face communication. Discuss

Online communication is preferable to face to face communication. Discuss D6RP6
In this modern world, we find ourselves engaging more on text messages on the expense of face-to-face conversations. However, online communication is unavoidable at certain situations but we opt it for daily basis, which begs the question: is online communication become threat to real life conversations? To begin with, I would outline the advantages of online communication. First argument in its favour is that it open up the possibility of communication of different peoples around the globe. This has considerable importance in workplace, where they can easily attend meetings with other countries such as San Francisco, China, India without exhausting, long and time-consuming trips. Moreover, it's quite beneficial for family and friends, who live far away. It paves the way for them to have a conversation virtually which is not possible in the past. Nevertheless, we can respond to text messages either immediately or at time which allowing us to editor polish our messages. Even though online communication help myraid benefits, but we can't overlook the face to face conversation. Some experts argue that lack of this kind of conversation eradicate are vital social communication skills such as compassion and expression which are only possible in real life situations. Beside that, long stretches of conversation are replacing with small emojis. For example, a study shown that majority of the people like to send important information via messages and they are badly failed in social virtues as their interaction is now only limited with their online friends on text messages. To conclude, although online communication seems to be important in fast paced today's world, we should not neglect the benefits of real life conversations. Lastly, having balance between online and real life is necessary for the development of people's.
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However
,
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online
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communication
is unavoidable at certain situations
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but
we opt it for daily basis, which begs the question: is
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online
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communication
become threat to
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real
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life
conversations?

To
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begin
with, I would outline the advantages of
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online
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communication
.
First
argument in its
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favour
is that it open up the possibility of
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communication
of
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different
peoples around the globe. This has considerable importance in workplace, where they can
easily
attend meetings with other countries such as San Francisco, China, India without exhausting, long and time-consuming trips.
Moreover
, it's quite beneficial for family and friends, who
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live
far away. It paves the way for them to have a
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conversation
virtually
which is not possible in the past.
Nevertheless
, we can respond to text messages either immediately or at time which allowing us to editor polish our messages.

Even though
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help
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myraid
benefits,
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we can't overlook the face to face
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conversation
.
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Some
experts argue that lack of this kind of
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conversation
eradicate are vital social
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communication
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skills
such as compassion and expression which are
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only
possible in
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real
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life
situations. Beside that, long stretches of
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conversation
are replacing with
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small
emojis.
For example
, a study shown that majority of the
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people
like to
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send
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important
information via
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messages and
they are
badly
failed in social virtues as their interaction is
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now
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limited with their
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friends on text messages.

To conclude
, although
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seems to be
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important
in
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fast
paced
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today
's world, we should not neglect the benefits of
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real
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life
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conversations
.
Lastly
, having balance between
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online
and
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real
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life
is necessary for the development of
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people
's.
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IELTS essay Online communication is preferable to face to face communication. Discuss

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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