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Online classes make traditional classes unnecessary. Do you agree or disagree?

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I agree with the statement that online classes make traditional classes unnecessary. First, due to the pandemic, online classes are really suitable and convenient in teaching and learning. Both teachers and students can interact via various online platforms such as: Zoom, Google meet, FCC. . . Second, online class is a good choice for anyone who self-study. There are a lot of different kinds of classes in every aspect for example: language, business, soft skills, science. . . Finally, we can save money and time for other purposes by studying online. They are flexible that we can arrange in our own schedule. Online classes nowadays are being improved and they’re more and more excellent in studying and teaching. However, it still can not replace traditional classes, especially classes of children.
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platforms such as: Zoom, Google
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different
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in every aspect
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skills
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Finally
, we can save money and time for other purposes by studying
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. They are flexible that we can arrange in our
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schedule.
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nowadays are being
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improved and
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IELTS essay Online classes make traditional classes unnecessary.

Essay
  American English
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130 words
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