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Onelanguage spoken lead to better worldwide telations

Onelanguage spoken lead to better worldwide telations 7Jl5b
In the internet age, knowing language is a significant field to asquire knowledge of the world. Undoubthfully, it hepls to understand with each other among the population of the world. If we spoke many languages it leads to better relations among countries. But one language spoken, l think, it is ineffective because it doesn't help to relate with others. If we say about the number of languages in the world, there are3000 more language in the world. However, some of them are being extinct rapidly owing to old people of the country or area spoken in this language. according to the scientiests experiences, if the language is spoken by the young, it is not a risk of endangerad. in my opinion one language spoken doesn'thelp to improve our relations that's why l want to be spoken many languages all the fields of world such as economical, cultural, scientific and other studies. in conclude l disagree that one language spoken leads to better realations in the worldwide
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is a significant field to
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asquire
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world
.
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, it
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, there are3000 more
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language
in the
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scientiests
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our relations that's why l want to
be spoken
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all the fields of
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conclude l disagree that one
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realations
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worldwide
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IELTS essay Onelanguage spoken lead to better worldwide telations

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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