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One world goverment is better than national govenment.

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In ages, there are many brutal war from many countries that changed the world a lot, until now they still conflict in many field. It makes people wodering that if the world only had transgoverment, what would it be. I 'm not sure about that, but it will be less casualties in war and people 'll live in a peacefull enviroment with less preconception than ever ages. Cause war had changed world in general way human affect in specific way, people in every countries are having mutual mind that always protect their domain from other countries. However, they still want to permated their culture and religion to global in oder to learn a being a part of their countries by economic, millitary, and also goverment. It make the strong and development countries become stronger, but with undevelopment countries are still poor and backward. What is mentioning is that it split the world up to two face of socialiasm. I realise that instead of dividing like that, we can connected together so as to recieved support by the stronger nation. It'll ensure the eqalty and humanright among the nations. Nowaday there 're also had the international organization like ASEAN, EU are both connected to manage and support each other from many way specially also have WHO, AUKUS that served for global. In other face, there are some difficulty when we are in trans goverment. They'll have a fight about culture, languages, tradctional, region, . ect. to make it unified speacially about ethicity and skin. Also gorverment is the most of important things ever to control and have a solution to global. Nation countries effect human a lot by war and still conflict in modern world but in orther ways special is economics. Each people 'll have a barrier to someone who another countries. So that i prefer to live in a trans gorverment for a peacefull enviroment, less casualities by war.
In ages, there are
many
brutal
war
from
many
countries
that
changed
the
world
a lot, until
now
they
still
conflict in
many field
. It
makes
people
wodering
that if the
world
only
had
transgoverment
, what would it be. I 'm not sure about that,
but
it will be
less
casualties in
war
and
people
'll
live
in a
peacefull
enviroment
with less preconception than ever ages. Cause
war
had
changed
world
in general
way human affect in specific way,
people
in every
countries
are having mutual mind that always protect their domain from other
countries
.
However
, they
still
want to
permated
their culture and religion to global in
oder
to learn a being a part of their
countries
by economic,
millitary
, and
also
goverment
. It
make
the strong and development
countries
become stronger,
but
with
undevelopment
countries
are
still
poor and backward. What is mentioning is that it split the
world
up to two
face
of
socialiasm
. I
realise
that
instead
of dividing like that, we can
connected
together
so as to
recieved
support by the stronger nation. It'll ensure the
eqalty
and
humanright
among the nations.
Nowaday
there 're
also
had the international organization like ASEAN, EU are both connected to manage and support each other from
many way
specially
also
have WHO,
AUKUS
that served for global. In other face, there are
some
difficulty when we are in trans
goverment
. They'll have a fight about culture, languages,
tradctional
, region
, .
ect
.
to
make
it unified
speacially
about
ethicity
and skin.
Also
gorverment
is the most of
important
things ever to control and have a solution to global. Nation
countries
effect human a lot by
war
and
still
conflict in modern
world
but
in
orther
ways special is economics. Each
people
'll have a barrier to someone who another
countries
.
So
that
i
prefer to
live
in a trans
gorverment
for a
peacefull
enviroment
, less
casualities
by
war
.
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IELTS essay One world goverment is better than national govenment.

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