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One problem faced by almost every big city

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Nowadays, traffic jam is considered one of the most crucial issues of every megapolis. Perhaps, the major cause of this issue is cars parked at the roadside. In other words, traffic jams, in most cases, are formed precisely because of cars that have been parked in an inappropriate place. They occupy half of the strip, and sometimes even the whole strip. Accordingly, the throughput of the road decreases. They park for the whole day, because they work nearby, but there is no parking lot where you can leave your car. They come on business to a building and leave the car on the side of the road, because, again, there is nowhere else to park. Another reasonable cause is road accidents. Accidents are the cause of serious traffic jams. Given the low speed of traffic in the city center during rush hour, these accidents are mostly minor. In case of any incident, the participants, if they do not agree with each other, have the right to call traffic police officers to register an accident. All this time, the damaged cars occupy the roadway and create a serious obstacle for other vehicles. As for solutions, government should provide with the construction of multi-level parking lots in the city, which will significantly reduce the number of cars that interfere with normal traffic. Another viable approach is to simplify the registration of minor accidents, which will significantly reduce the number of cars at the side of the road, and thus the obstacles that interfere with normal traffic will disappear. To recapitulate briefly, this essay discussed how traffic congestion is instigated by cars parking by the roadside and drivers having small accidents. This essay also suggests two remedies to mitigate the problem: building multi-level parking lots and simplifying the registration process of accidents. If the above-mentioned measures are taken, the problem may be solved viably.
Nowadays,
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traffic
jam
is considered
one of the most crucial issues of every
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megapolis
.

Perhaps, the major cause of this issue is
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cars
parked at the roadside.
In other words
,
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traffic
jams,
in most cases
,
are formed
precisely
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because
of
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cars
that have
been parked
in an inappropriate place. They occupy half of the strip, and
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sometimes
even the whole strip.
Accordingly
, the throughput of the
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road
decreases. They park for the whole day,
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because
they work nearby,
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but
there is no
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parking
lot where you can
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leave
your
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car
. They
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come
on business to a building and
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leave
the
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car
on the side of the
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road
,
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because
, again, there is nowhere else to park. Another reasonable cause is
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road
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accidents
.
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Accidents
are the cause of serious
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traffic
jams.
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Given
the low speed of
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traffic
in the city center during rush hour, these
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accidents
are
mostly
minor. In case of any incident, the participants, if they do not
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agree
with each other, have the right to call
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traffic
police officers to register an
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accident
. All this time, the damaged
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cars
occupy the roadway and create a serious obstacle for other vehicles.

As for solutions,
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government
should provide with the construction of multi-level
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parking
lots in the city, which will
significantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the number of
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cars
that interfere with normal
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traffic
. Another viable approach is to simplify the registration of minor
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accidents
, which will
significantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the number of
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cars
at the side of the
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road
, and
thus
the obstacles that interfere with normal
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traffic
will disappear.

To recapitulate
briefly
, this essay discussed how
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traffic
congestion
is instigated
by
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cars
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
by the roadside and drivers having
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accidents
. This essay
also
suggests two remedies to mitigate the problem: building multi-level
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parking
lots and simplifying the registration process of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
accidents
. If the above-mentioned measures
are taken
, the problem may
be solved
viably
.
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IELTS essay One problem faced by almost every big city

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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