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Nowadays, more and more building have been rebuilt or redesigned in to a new modern form. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

Nowadays, more and more building have been rebuilt or redesigned in to a new modern form. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it? yXoPE
Only one thing in life which is constant is Change. In today’s world, modernization plays a vital role. There shall be debate that today extensive amount of construction is being shaped up reassembled to a latest current form. The essay may contain pros and cons within it. Points related to it are elucidated in the below paragraphs. First and foremost, modernization of buildings is inevitable in present technological and overcrowded world. The buildings should be constructed to come up with people and their needs as they are transiting towards cities. Enlargement of the cities are necessary now. To corroborate with the population the old buildings are demolished and erect up with new modern technologies like water sewage, electricity and many more. For example, in country like India where population is more than 130 corers have no chance other than reconstruction of old buildings with latest amenities. On the opposite side, people should not be clumsy and should think of the ancient memories of the city. By redesigning we are losing our local culture architectural construction. The new generation will not get any knowledge of the old and past technical building. For instance, today’s child is totally unknown with the fact of some history in their indigenous city. Moreover, by rebuilding it we also spoil the ancient history of our country. In conclusion, to fight with the overcrowded city, it is mandatory to construct extra buildings and without any other thinking the old and ancient buildings must be rebuilt. The government should strive to construct in the outskirts of cities as much as possible so that old structure is saved.
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one thing in life which is constant is
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Change
. In
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today
’s world, modernization plays a vital role. There shall be debate that
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today
extensive amount of construction is
being shaped
up reassembled to
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a
latest
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current
form. The essay may contain pros and cons within it. Points related to it
are elucidated
in the below paragraphs.

First
and foremost, modernization of
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buildings
is inevitable in present technological and overcrowded world. The
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buildings
should
be constructed
to
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come
up with
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people
and their needs as they are transiting towards
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cities
. Enlargement of the
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cities
are necessary
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now
. To corroborate with the population the
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old
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buildings
are demolished
and erect up with new modern technologies like water sewage, electricity and
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many
more.
For example
, in country like India where population is more than 130 corers have no chance other than reconstruction of
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old
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buildings
with
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latest
amenities.

On the opposite side,
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people
should not be clumsy and should
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think
of the ancient memories of the city. By redesigning we are losing our local culture architectural construction. The new generation will not
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get
any knowledge of the
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old
and past technical
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building
.
For instance
,
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today
’s child is
totally
unknown with the fact of
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some
history in their indigenous city.
Moreover
, by rebuilding it we
also
spoil the ancient history of our country.

In conclusion
, to fight with the overcrowded city, it is mandatory to construct extra
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buildings
and without any other thinking the
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old
and ancient
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buildings
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must
be rebuilt. The
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government
should strive to construct in the outskirts of
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cities
as much as possible
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so
that
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old
structure
is saved
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, more and more building have been rebuilt or redesigned in to a new modern form. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

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269 words
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