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Smoking is injurious to health. Do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is injurious to health. Do you agree or disagree? pRr5w
Comsumption of tobbaco is detrimental for human health. It is often found that dieases like cancer is common in people who smokes and outcome of cancer is nothing but only death. I strongly agree with the proffered statement, reasons for which are reflected in the given paragraphs. Must have heared smoking kills. Still, people stepping forward towards smoking and putting their life in dangerous. It spoils lungs, kidneys and many time brain also gets dead. Smokers are also playing with others life which we call a passive smoking. For instance, a person is smoking in his home where other family members are also living, whose health also get impair by smokes. Moreover, youth are much engaged in smoking presetly. They are totally unaware of their end results which is only sorrow. On one hand life span of people decreases and on other hand income companies increases. Governments and many companies clearly oppose the comsumption of tobbacco via advertisements. For instance, while watching a TV shows eye stops when we find such people awarness advertisement. But, so called blind people still continue to smoke and moving forward for a deadly end of life. They not only spoil their own life but their familes too. From my point of view, government should take some concrete steps to stop the society moving towards a dead end. Specially the youth for whom it is a style icon should be stopped by hook or by kook. In conclusion, it is mandatory to spread the awarness against this red eye situation to prevent human life and save families from getting in wrost situation. People will help people to stop threatening situation.
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Comsumption
of
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tobbaco
is detrimental for human health. It is
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like cancer is common in
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people
who
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smokes
and outcome of cancer is nothing
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only
death. I
strongly
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agree
with the proffered statement, reasons for which
are reflected
in the
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given
paragraphs.

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Must
have
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heared
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smoking
kills.
Still
,
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people
stepping forward towards
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smoking
and putting their
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life
in
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dangerous
. It spoils lungs, kidneys and
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many time
brain
also
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gets
dead. Smokers are
also
playing with others
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life
which we call a passive
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smoking
.
For instance
, a person is
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smoking
in his home where other family members are
also
living, whose health
also
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get
impair by smokes.
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, youth are much engaged in
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smoking
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presetly
. They are
totally
unaware of their
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end
results which is
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only
sorrow.

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span of
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people
decreases and on other hand income
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companies
increases.
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Governments
and
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many
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companies
clearly
oppose the
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comsumption
of
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tobbacco
via advertisements.
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, while watching a TV
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shows
eye
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stops
when we find such
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people
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awarness
advertisement.
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,
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so called
blind
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people
still
continue to smoke and moving forward for a deadly
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end
of
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life
. They not
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spoil their
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their
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familes
too.

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government
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stop
the society moving towards a dead
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end
.
Specially
the youth for whom it is a style icon should be
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stopped
by hook or by kook.

In conclusion
, it is mandatory to spread the
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awarness
against this red eye situation to
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prevent
human
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life
and save families from getting in
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wrost
situation.
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will
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help
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to
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stop
threatening situation.
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IELTS essay Smoking is injurious to health. Do you agree or disagree?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
275 words
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