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One of the strings in my guitar

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One of the strings in my guitar. et off the bus across from the supermarket. => ___1 Walk north for two blocks. => ___2 3. Go down the street until you see the supermarket. => __4_ Walk towards the river. => __1_ Take the first street on the left. => _3__ Go through the intersection. => __2_ 4. Get off the bus across from the school. => _1__ Go down the street until you see a church. =>___4 Turn right just past the gas station. => ___3 Walk north for about four blocks. => __2_
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off the bus across from the supermarket.
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Walk north for two blocks.
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3. Go down the street until you
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see
the supermarket.
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Walk towards the river.
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__1_

Take the
first
street on the
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left
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_3__

Go through the intersection.
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4.
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Get
off the bus across from the school.
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_1__

Go down the street until you
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see
a church.
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___4

Turn right
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just
past the gas station.
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Walk north for about four blocks.
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__2_
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IELTS essay One of the strings in my guitar

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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