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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is Increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 2 Give teasons for your answer and inchide breathles from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is Increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 2 Give teasons for your answer and inchide breathles from your own knowledge or experience 9gop

Working for the same organization shows one’s loyalty towards the organization. On the other hand, working for different organizations makes you learn more and experience different opportunities. Working for the same organization in the same position may be boring and, in few cases, they tend to earn less. For instance, an engineer working for the same company earns less appraisal. On the contrary, when he switches to another company his salary hike is likely to be more than the appraisal. The fact that many people like to change their organization is due to the fact that it allows them to explore new cities, people, and work challenges. Also, the fact that some professionals are not daring enough to adapt to the new conditions and hence they tend to work for the same organization is undeniable. These people and their families often tend to have problems due to changes in weather. And many a time people don’t like to go away from their natives where all their memories have cherished. But, in many cases, the people just don’t want to change their workplace because they are very satisfied and happy with their work, organization, and the city. Often in many professions changing organizations need a lot of formidable efforts. For example, they may find it hard to shift their apparatus to a new place. So, these people tend not to think about changing their workstations. The fact that changing organization also means looking for a new job for their spouse and a new school for their children makes people stick to one particular company. To Conclude, both sides have their own positives and negatives. It is up to one’s choice that what gives them more satisfaction.

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To Conclude
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 positives and negatives. It is up to one’s choice that what gives them more satisfaction. 