It is true that humans now tend to have a longer life due to the amelioration of medical care. Although this trend has some benefits, I would argue that there are more drawbacks.
On the one hand, the increased life span of people has several benefits. The chief benefit is that people live longer gives them an opportunity to enjoy their life. The elderly who do not worry about their children or their work choose to live positively. For example, an American couple devotes the rest of life to travelling around the world and exploring exotic places where they cannot go when they were young. Another benefit is that older members can make profound contributions to the development of their own community. When they are free from work, they may have a different outlook on life around them, and they therefore may positively affect their neighborhood. For example, in Vietnam many clubs or charities founded by senior members ran many events or projects successfully such as “The older, the wiser“.
On the other hand, I believe that the disadvantages of longevity are even more significant. Firstly, when governments pour a large amount of money into paying pension for retired people, national budgets can be put in danger. This financial burden is also put in taxpayers when the number of those who are working is reducing. For example, in some countries with aging population such as Japan or China, employees can be taxed up to 50 per cent of their income. Secondly, as seniors are healthier than they used to before, they can linger on their working life. This may compound unemployment and crime among young people because experienced people will have a head start over juniors when it comes to job hunting. As a result, the number of the unemployed increases and some youths resort to committing petty crimes to support themselves and their family.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the drawbacks of living longer outweigh the benefits.
It is true that humans
now
tend to have a longer
life
due to the amelioration of medical care. Although this trend has
some
benefits
, I would argue that there are more drawbacks.
On the one hand, the increased
life
span of
people
has several
benefits
. The chief
benefit
is that
people
live
longer gives them an opportunity to enjoy their
life
. The elderly who do not worry about their children or their work choose to
live
positively
.
For example
, an American couple devotes the rest of
life
to travelling around the world and exploring exotic places where they cannot go when they were young. Another
benefit
is that older members can
make
profound contributions to the development of their
own
community. When they are free from work, they may have a
different
outlook on
life
around them, and they
therefore
may
positively
affect their neighborhood.
For example
, in Vietnam
many
clubs or charities founded by senior members ran
many
events
or projects
successfully
such as “The older, the wiser“.
On the other hand
, I believe that the disadvantages of longevity are even more significant.
Firstly
, when
governments
pour a large amount of money into paying pension for retired
people
, national budgets can
be put
in
danger
. This financial burden is
also
put in taxpayers when the number of those who are working is reducing.
For example
, in
some
countries with aging population such as Japan or China, employees can
be taxed
up to 50 per cent of their income.
Secondly
, as seniors are healthier than they
used
to
before
, they can linger on their working
life
. This may compound unemployment and crime among young
people
because
experienced
people
will have a head
start
over juniors when it
comes
to job hunting.
As a result
, the number of the unemployed increases and
some
youths resort to committing petty crimes to support themselves and their family.
In conclusion
, it seems to me that the drawbacks of living longer outweigh the
benefits
.