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“One can make a decision quickly or after carefully thinking for a long time.” say it is always wrong to take a quick decision. Do you agree or disagree with this view? Use specific examples and reasons to support your answer.

“One can make a decision quickly or after carefully thinking for a long time. ” say it is always wrong to take a quick decision. with this view? Use specific examples and reasons to support your answer. yPal3
Decision making is always depending on the individual's choices. Most people do not know the profound effect of their decision on their life. As decisions shape the individual’s life. A decision made rapidly or carefully thinking is totally depends on the circumstances in which decisions is made. I strongly believed in that individuals should decision after carefully thinking. Firstly, there are several decisions that results in war, peace or change in law of the country. This kind of decisions are always affecting the individuals directly or indirectly. For example, the decision made by the government of India to globalize Indian economy allows the multinational companies to do their businesses in India. Though, the results of that decisions were slow but affects many other lives. But those decisions increase employment. Thus, I believe to made a decision after thinking and planning wisely. Secondly, A few decisions rule over the life of the person such as career planning or investing a money somewhere. To corroborate this, after clearing school grades, student decide to take one subject as his/her career. At that time if he/she take a decision hastily or by following the trends without thinking what they want to do in their life. They couldn’t follow their dreams. Instead of this, they can take opinions from seniors or family, they would have many options to chase their dreams. This made me believe to take a decision prudently. On the other hand, in certain circumstances we make a quick decision to resolve those situations are necessary. But there are only few situations where we require to take an instant decision such as medical emergency. But for the better future, the mindfully decisions are always required. At the end, I would pen down to stat that decisions making in hustle are mostly wrong. Decision we make today will be affect our tomorrow. So, it is always good to make a decision after giving a carefully thinking.
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Decision making
is always depending on the individual's choices. Most
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people
do not know the profound effect of their
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decision
on their
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life
.
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As
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decisions
shape the individual’s
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life
. A
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decision
made
rapidly
or
carefully
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thinking
is
totally
depends on the circumstances in which
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decisions
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is
made. I
strongly
believed in that individuals should
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decision
after
carefully
thinking.

Firstly
, there are several
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decisions
that results in war, peace or
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change
in law of the country. This kind of
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decisions
are always affecting the individuals
directly
or
indirectly
.
For example
, the
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decision
made by the
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government
of India to globalize Indian economy
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allows
the multinational
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companies
to do their businesses in India. Though, the results of that
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decisions
were slow
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but
affects
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many
other
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lives
.
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But
those
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decisions
increase employment.
Thus
, I
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believe to
made a
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decision
after
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thinking
and planning
wisely
.

Secondly
, A few
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decisions
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rule
over the
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life
of the person such as career planning or investing a money somewhere. To corroborate this, after clearing school grades, student decide to take one subject as his/her career. At that time if he/she take a
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decision
hastily
or by following the trends without
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thinking
what they want to do in their
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life
. They couldn’t follow their dreams.
Instead
of this, they can take opinions from seniors or family, they would have
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many
options to chase their dreams. This made me believe to take a
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decision
prudently
.

On the other hand
, in certain circumstances we
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make
a quick
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decision
to resolve those situations are necessary.
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But
there are
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only
few situations where we require to take an instant
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decision
such as medical emergency.
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But
for the better future, the
mindfully
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decisions
are always required.

At the
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end
, I would pen down to stat that
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decisions
making in hustle are
mostly
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wrong
.
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Decision
we
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make
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today
will be affect our tomorrow.
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So
, it is always
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good
to
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make
a
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decision
after giving a
carefully
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thinking
.
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IELTS essay “One can make a decision quickly or after carefully thinking for a long time. ” say it is always wrong to take a quick decision. with this view? Use specific examples and reasons to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
322 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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