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nowadays many people prefer to shop in super market rather than small or local shops. Is this positive or negative development ?

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In modern era, supermarket is preferred by large number of individual for shopping instead of small shops. Here, this essay intends to discuss positive development of this given statement and conclude to a relevant conclusion. To commence with, large number of individuals prefer to do shopping in malls rather than local shops. the main reason is every product is available under one roof. To specify, super markets have better infrastructure and better facilities such as air conditioner and get many offers on several goods. For example, a survey was conducted by 2011 in India that 75 percentage of individual prefer to do shopping in super market due to hectic schedule and better discounts. Hence supermarkets give more amenities and offers than local shops. Moving further, if masses do shopping in malls than it may increase status in front of society. To elaborate, shopping complex have high quality of products at best prices and all goods are of high brand. for instances, a survey was conducted by ''cambridge university'' that nearly 80 percentage of individual prefer to do shopping in super complex because of good quality products and long lasting. Thus, by shopping in comercialcentre status of masses increase in their social circle. In conclusion, individual prefer to buy products in malls due to better amenities, discounts as well as increase personality of masses.
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is preferred
by large number of
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for
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shopping
instead
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small
shops. Here, this essay intends to discuss
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positive
development of this
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given
statement and conclude to a relevant conclusion. To commence with, large number of
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individuals
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prefer
to do
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shopping
in malls
rather
than local shops.
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the
main reason is every
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product
is available under one roof. To specify, super markets have
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better
infrastructure and
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better
facilities such as air conditioner and
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get
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many
offers on several
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goods
.
For example
, a survey
was conducted
by 2011 in India that 75 percentage of
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individual
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prefer
to do
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shopping
in super market due to hectic schedule and
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better
discounts.
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Hence
supermarkets give more amenities and offers than local shops. Moving
further
, if masses do
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shopping
in malls than it may increase status in front of society. To elaborate,
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shopping
complex have high quality of
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products
at best prices and all
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goods
are of high brand.
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for
instances, a survey
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cambridge
university'' that
nearly
80 percentage of
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individual
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to do
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shopping
in super complex
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because
of
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good
quality
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products
and
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long lasting
.
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, by
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shopping
in
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comercialcentre
status of masses increase in their social circle.
In conclusion
,
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individual
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prefer
to
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buy
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products
in malls due to
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better
amenities, discounts
as well
as increase personality of masses.
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IELTS essay nowadays many people prefer to shop in super market rather than small or local shops. Is this positive or negative development?

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  American English
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