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One can learn a lot about a person from the type of friends that the person has.

One can learn a lot about a person from the type of friends that the person has. kYj0W
The debate between person behavior according to their college or way different than their fellow companion has been proven to be controversial. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad elements should be taken in to consideration in order to access constructive and destructive facets of this issue. some remains intransigent in the view that people behavior can be generalize according to their peripheral people while other take a stance of the opposite view. From my vantage point, I concur that people should not be judge on the basis of their college as the fact that people may have different habits and ideology regardless their surrounding environment. The first exquisite point to be included is that person may be stick to their main belief most often. Despite the truth that people may influence from their companion, they may not adopt what is the habit of their college. Divergently, within the same group, people may not hold the similar opinion even their most friends internal feelings have apparently same. To show this argument vividly, my personal life has gone through this experience. back in my high school I was surrounded by a lot of people who were addicted to the smoking and alcoholic addiction. However, my case was different than others. I was always resolute about my decision that I would never take cigarette and drinks even their frequent persuasion. By sticking my own decision, I remained different than them. So, just living in same clan does not mean that he/she should have similar opinion and behavior. Secondly, another reasons that need some words to say is that sometimes people need to entice with the certain people beside their interest. it is not seems possible to stay in the group in where the person feel alike; sometimes they have to compromise with the situation. For instance, I had spent my two years in my life with the guy who was reticent and barely express his feelings. although, my gesture was opposite to him; I like to fond with people who are jubilant and ebullient while he remained lethargic all the time. due to some circumstances, I had to live with him which was hard of course. but, it does not mean that I was like him. In this way, people will around you might not represent all the time and sometimes you may have to make effort to live with them. Lastly, although the aforementioned view were the first come cross the mind at the first glance. Nevertheless, there may be subtle point that should be included in the context. sometimes people enjoy the company different than self because of their unique character. back in my high school, I also lure to spend some time with one friend while I was free because of his charismatic behavior. may be I was bit attracted by his personality but I was unable as well as well not to simulate him. this incident again clarify people may not be same as their companion even they enjoy the moment. To sum up, the above mentioned reasons helps to prove how other people around you or friend cannot decide your personality.
The debate between person behavior according to their college or way
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different
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than
their fellow companion has
been proven
to be controversial. Nowadays,
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many
are adamant that a myriad
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elements
should
be taken
in to consideration in order to access constructive and destructive facets of this issue.
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some
remains intransigent in the view that
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people
behavior can be
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generalize
according to their peripheral
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people
while other take a stance of the opposite view. From my vantage point, I concur that
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people
should not be
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judge
on the basis of their college as the fact that
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people
may have
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different
habits and ideology regardless their surrounding environment.

The
first
exquisite point to
be included
is that person may be stick to their main belief most
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often
. Despite the truth that
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people
may influence from their companion, they may not adopt what is the habit of their college.
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Divergently
, within the same group,
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people
may not hold the similar opinion even their most friends internal feelings have
apparently
same. To
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show
this argument
vividly
, my personal life has gone through this experience.
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back
in my high school I
was surrounded
by
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a lot of
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people
who
were addicted
to the smoking and alcoholic addiction.
However
, my case was
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different
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than
others. I was always resolute about my decision that I would never take cigarette and drinks even their frequent persuasion. By sticking my
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own
decision, I remained
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different
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than
them.
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So
,
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just
living in same clan does not mean that he/she should have similar opinion and behavior.

Secondly
, another reasons that need
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some
words to say is that
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sometimes
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people
need to entice with the certain
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people
beside their interest.
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it
is not seems possible to stay in the group in where the person
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feel
alike;
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sometimes
they
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have to
compromise with the situation.
For instance
, I had spent my two years in my life with the guy who was reticent and
barely
express his feelings.
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although
, my gesture was opposite to him; I like to fond with
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people
who are jubilant and ebullient while he remained lethargic all the time.
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due
to
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some
circumstances, I had to
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live
with him which was
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hard
of course
.
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but
, it does not mean that I was like him. In this way,
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people
will around you might not represent all the time and
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sometimes
you may
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have to
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make
effort to
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live
with them.

Lastly
, although the aforementioned view were the
first
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come
cross the mind at the
first
glance.
Nevertheless
, there may be subtle point that should
be included
in the context.
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sometimes
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people
enjoy the
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company
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different
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than
self
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because
of their unique character.
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back
in my high school, I
also
lure to spend
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some
time with one friend while I was free
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because
of his charismatic behavior.
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may be
I was
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bit
attracted by his personality
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but
I was unable
as well
as well
not to simulate him.
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this
incident again clarify
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people
may not be same as their companion even they enjoy the moment.

To sum up, the above mentioned reasons
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helps
to prove how other
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people
around you or friend cannot decide your personality.
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IELTS essay One can learn a lot about a person from the type of friends that the person has.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
524 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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