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On the one hand, peoples those have their own opinion are usually more succsessful in live, then peoples those listen to someone guidance. For instance, my friend Oleg has never listen to somebody’s advice. Now he has him own business and huge profit.

On the one hand, peoples those have their own opinion are usually more succsessful in live, then peoples those listen to someone guidance. For instance, my friend Oleg has never listen to somebody’s advice. Now he has him own business and huge profit. Ywxld

Nowadays, some people looking for advice during choosing their future career. Others, better take a look for their own knowledge. However, personaly, I think that correctly to use your own mind and ideas. This essay will emphasize why is better to keep your own point of view, but also consider advices from other peoples. On the one hand, peoples those have their own opinion are usually more succsessful in live, then peoples those listen to someone guidance. For instance, my friend Oleg has never listen to somebody’s advice. Now he has him own business and huge profit.

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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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own
 knowledge.

However
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personaly
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that correctly
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 mind and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
. This essay will emphasize why is better to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 point of view, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 consider advices from other peoples.

On the one hand, peoples those have their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 opinion are usually
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succsessful
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
, then peoples those listen to someone guidance.

For instance
, my friend Oleg has never Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "listened".listened
listen
 to somebody’s advice. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 he has him This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 business and huge profit. 