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mpst people today have a smartphone, but are they really essential for modern life

mpst people today have a smartphone, but are they really essential for modern life x85J9

Unquestionably, these days 99 percent of population have smartphone. The question is the developed life depends on smartphone? In this essay i will drow the positive and negative points about modern mobile phone. In terms positive side, i would smartphone has developed everything nowadays. In other word it changed whole life. To illustrate, you can buy and sell what you need. and you can call any one from even if they are at the end of the world. On top of that, every map of the world in your hand. As result, no one will be lost anymore. besides, too easy to find your address just give someone the postcode, no direction anymore On other hand. obviously there are major numbers of bad things in smartphone. First off, verey easy for children to watch adults videos and websites. In addition, we lost our time with apps not useful such as snapchat, instagram and tiktok. ِAlso, the person health will be terrible, as proved by researches in the US. In conclusion, although the smartphone has negative points. But we can avoid it like keep eye on children while they used it. Also, on other side our life our lives are now become easier.

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 the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 points about modern mobile phone.

In terms This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 side, Did you mean "I"?I
i
The word 'smartphone' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
would smartphone
 has developed everything nowadays. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 other word it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 whole life. To illustrate, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 and sell what you need. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 you can call Did you mean "anyone"?anyone
any one
 from even if they are at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the world. On top of that
, every map of the world in your hand. As result, no one will be lost
 anymore. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBesides
besides
, too easy to find your address This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 give someone the postcode, no direction anymore

On other hand. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterObviously
obviously
 there are major numbers of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 things in smartphone. First
 off, Possible spelling mistake found.varyVeraveryMarydairyfairy
verey
 easy for children to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 adults videos and websites. In addition
, we lost our time with apps not useful such as Possible spelling mistake found.Snapchatsnap chat
snapchat
, Possible spelling mistake found.Instagram
instagram
 and Possible spelling mistake found.TikTok
tiktok
. ِAlso
, the person health will be terrible, as proved by researches in the US.

In conclusion
, although the smartphone has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 points. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 we can avoid it like This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 eye on children while they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 it. Also
, on other side our life our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 become easier. 