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ome people sleep in a dark and quiet room. Other people sleep with a small light on and don’t mind noise. How do you like to sleep? Explain your answe

ome people sleep in a dark and quiet room. Other people sleep with a small light on and don’t mind noise. How do you like to sleep? Explain your answe 5e2A
As a child, you might remember hearing “lights out” as a way to tell you it was time to go to bed. Having the lights off at bedtime is much more than a common bedtime phrase, though. h i hi hi hi As a child, you might remember hearing “lights out” as a way to tell you it was time to go to bed. Having the lights off at bedtime is much more than a common bedtime phrase, though. h i hi hi hi As a child, you might remember hearing “lights out” as a way to tell you it was time to go to bed. Having the lights off at bedtime is much more than a common bedtime phrase, though. h i hi hi hi
As a child, you might remember hearing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
“lights
out” as a way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you it was time to go to bed. Having the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lights
off at bedtime is much more than a common bedtime phrase, though.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
h
i hi hi
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
hi


As a child, you might remember hearing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
“lights
out” as a way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you it was time to go to bed. Having the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lights
off at bedtime is much more than a common bedtime phrase, though.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
h
i hi hi hi

As a child, you might remember hearing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
“lights
out” as a way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you it was time to go to bed. Having the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lights
off at bedtime is much more than a common bedtime phrase, though.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
h
i hi hi
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
hi

IELTS essay ome people sleep in a dark and quiet room. Other people sleep with a small light on and don’t mind noise. How do you like to sleep? Explain your answe

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
125 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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