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advertising is too common.is it abe to persuade public now or does it get unnoticed

advertising is too common. is it abe to persuade public now or does it get unnoticed 8eJx
Advertising is the first step in the promotion of a product or a service. With increasing competition in the market, advertising has become an important aspect to stand out from the crowd. Advertisements are not just limited to convincing the client but it also helps in maintaining the brand image. Various large scale and small scale companies spend a tremendous amount of money on advertisement. Advertisements are created in a way that it depicts that the product the potential buyers are viewing might be a solution to some of their problem. This way advertisements trick people into buying stuff. There are man products in the market that go unnoticed due to lack of smart advertising. Advertisements have flooded the market, hence it is believed that the convincing power of advertisements has decreased significantly. The trends of viewership are always unpredictable but adverts are trying their best to keep up with the latest trends. For example, when television advertisements lost their glory, businesses took no time to shift to social media for advertising purposes. The creators of advertisements ask actors or famous people to promote their brands. Young people or small people usually fail for this bait and buy products that their favourite influencers promote. To generate profits, companies provide discounts or other offers which are marketed with the help of advertisements. According to me, though advertisements have become very common still the way advertisements modify themselves with changing trends, it is still able to convince the buyers.
Advertising is the
first
step in the promotion of a
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product
or a service. With increasing competition in the market, advertising has become an
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important
aspect to stand out from the crowd.
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Advertisements
are not
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just
limited to convincing the client
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but
it
also
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helps
in maintaining the brand image. Various large scale and
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small
scale
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companies
spend a tremendous amount of money on
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advertisement
.
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Advertisements
are created
in a way that it depicts that the
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product
the potential buyers are viewing might be a solution to
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some
of their problem. This way
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advertisements
trick
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people
into buying stuff. There are
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man
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products
in the market that go unnoticed due to lack of smart advertising.
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Advertisements
have flooded the market,
hence
it
is believed
that the convincing power of
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advertisements
has decreased
significantly
. The trends of viewership are always unpredictable
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but
adverts are trying their best to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
up with the latest trends.
For example
, when television
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advertisements
lost their glory, businesses took no time to shift to social media for advertising purposes. The creators of
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advertisements
ask actors or
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famous
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people
to promote their brands. Young
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people
or
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small
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people
usually
fail for this bait and
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buy
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products
that their
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favourite
influencers promote. To generate profits,
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companies
provide discounts or other offers which
are marketed
with the
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help
of
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advertisements
.
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According to me
, though
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advertisements
have become
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very
common
still
the way
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advertisements
modify themselves with changing trends, it is
still
able to convince the buyers.
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IELTS essay advertising is too common. is it abe to persuade public now or does it get unnoticed

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
247 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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