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Animal are in danger and extinction. Some people say that we should only those animal which are useful to human . Do you agree or disagree

Animal are in danger and extinction. Some people say that we should only those animal which are useful to human. y9gD
There is no doubt that wildlife habitats are being destroyed and whole species of animals are on the verge of disappearance due to human activities. This is a debatable issue among individuals whether only useful animals should be prevented by masses or not. I disagree with above the notion because whole animal species are paramount part of our ecosystem and not only human should be approached to save an useful, but also others animals have own values on earth. To commence with, all wildlife habitats plays an important role in ecosystem. Owing to the fact that those animals are helpful to maintain the balance of life. If one animal lose in ecological chain this may be effected in directly and indirectly way on human life. For example, bats were going in endanger day by day due to this the productivity of soil was declining because bats are helped to control the insect population which insects are harmful for crops. Thus, if those animal species are extincted then human being are not survive properly on earth without food. In addition to it, some rodents species which helps to dispersal of seeds and pollination. That why, human should not save only an useful animals because those animals are not ensure to survive of people, but also those are helpful to protect the bio diversity. Furthermore, wild animals provides multifurious valuable things such as medicine and fur. Many scientists are used to research as well as are made medicine which comes in immensely handy to treatment of human being. For example, the hom of rhinoceros has assisted for medical purposes. Moreover, preventing animal in zoos are good source of revenue
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destroyed
and whole species of
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animals
are on the verge of disappearance due to
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human
activities. This is a debatable issue among individuals whether
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only
useful
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animals
should be
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prevented
by masses or not. I disagree with above the notion
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because
whole
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animal
species are paramount part of our ecosystem and not
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only
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human
should
be approached
to save
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an
useful,
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but
also
others
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animals
have
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own
values on earth. To commence with, all wildlife habitats plays an
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important
role in ecosystem. Owing to the fact that those
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animals
are helpful to maintain the balance of life. If one
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animal
lose in ecological chain this may
be effected
in
directly
and
indirectly
way on
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human
life.
For example
, bats were going in endanger day by day due to this the productivity of soil was declining
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because
bats are
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helped
to control the insect population which insects are harmful for crops.
Thus
, if those
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animal
species
are extincted
then
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human
being are not
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survive
properly
on earth without food.
In addition
to it,
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some
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rodents
species which
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helps
to dispersal of seeds and pollination. That why,
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human
should not save
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only
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an
useful
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animals
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because
those
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animals
are not
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ensure
to survive of
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people
,
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but
also
those are helpful to protect the bio diversity.
Furthermore
, wild
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animals
provides
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multifurious
valuable things such as medicine and fur.
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Many
scientists are
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used
to research
as well
as
are made
medicine which
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comes
in
immensely
handy to treatment of
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human
being.
For example
, the
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hom
of rhinoceros has assisted for medical purposes.
Moreover
, preventing
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animal
in zoos are
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good
source of revenue
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IELTS essay Animal are in danger and extinction. Some people say that we should only those animal which are useful to human.

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