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ome people believe today that everyone has right to access the internet and the government should provide this access for free other people believe that the access to the internet is not right and should be paid for like other services

ome people believe today that everyone has right to access the internet and the government should provide this access for free other people believe that the access to the internet is not right and should be paid for like other services QL7PL

Nowadays, internet becomes an essential thing for survival. Some people thinks the access to internet should be free of cost while other believes it should be paid. Society is completely relying on internet. Before the internet people had newspaper, television and telephones but now the internet replace all this. All news are available on internet. In past, people used to watched television however in this time era you can just simply see any serial on your mobile phone with the help of internet. Many students starts e learning which requires internet. There are many online jobs for example during lockdown people were abled to work from home. On the other hand, there are some countries in Africa where people don’t know what is internet? They are starving and living below the poverty rate so we can say government can charge the internet and use that money to public resources. I think internet should be free of cost because it is basic need of human life for example during the pandemic of Covid 19 students are only eligible to attend their classes online and employers worked from home with aid of internet.

Nowadays, internet becomes an essential thing for survival. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.think
thinks
 the access to internet should be free of cost while other believes it should be paid
.

Society is completely relying on internet. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 the internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 had newspaper, television and telephones This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the internet replace all this. All news Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "is".is
are
 available on internet. Did you mean: "In the past"?In the past
In past
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
watched
 television however
 in this time era you can This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
simply
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 any serial on your mobile phone with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of internet. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 students You should probably use "start".start
starts
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.e-learning
e learning
 which requires internet. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 online jobs for example
 during lockdown You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 were Possible spelling mistake found.ablefabledgabledtabledbledcabled
abled
 to work from home.

On the other hand
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 countries in Africa where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 don’t know what is internet? They are starving and living below the poverty rate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can say This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 can charge the internet and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 that money to public resources.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 internet should be free of cost This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is basic need of human life for example
 during the pandemic of Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
Covid 19
 students are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 eligible to attend their classes online and employers worked from home with aid of internet. 