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Old Mobile phones vs the New Mobile phones - Features and comparison

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Mobile phones have come of age both as a piece of technology and a gadget everyone needs these days. Nowadays, you can simply go to the market and choose a phone according to your budget and style. Almost all the new phones have a full color display, internet connectivity and cameras with video making capabilities. All this, in a much lighter and sleeker avatar as compared to their predecessors. The 1st gen mobile phones though had basic common features with the modern ones like earphones, battery etc, they were quite different when it came to their overall weight and display type which was black and white. Despite these basic features these phones were considered a luxury due to their rarity and hefty price tags. Thanks to the advancement of tech that these devices are much more affordable and available now and the rising demand only guarantees a constant and rapid growth in this technology and space.

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